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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Tsitsi Masiyiwa|Tsitsi Masiyiwa]] (February 1)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Thilsebatti were:

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Thilsebatti (talk) 10:30, 1 February 2025 (UTC)

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Hello, Substantiator!

Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Thilsebatti (talk) 10:30, 1 February 2025 (UTC)

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Consider resubmitting

Consider resubmitting to see what a new reviewer will think. David notMD (talk) 12:30, 12 February 2025 (UTC)

:Thanks @David notMD I have resubmitted. Thank you for your valuable contribution and guidance. Substantiator (talk) 11:35, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

::I recommend you delete the last paragraph in Leadership and influence, as it is not in a neutral point of view (WP:NPOV) and not referenced. Wikipedia's "voice" is supposed to be neutral. Any laudatory content has to be attributed to a valid reference. David notMD (talk) 12:49, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Tsitsi Masiyiwa|Tsitsi Masiyiwa]] (February 14)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Taabii was:

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Taabii (talk) 16:54, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

:See my Comment at the draft. David notMD (talk) 22:29, 14 February 2025 (UTC)

Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Tsitsi Masiyiwa|Tsitsi Masiyiwa]] (May 8)

File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by FuzzyMagma was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=remove all information that us poorly sourced, especially those referenced to primary sources}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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FuzzyMagma (talk) 15:38, 8 May 2025 (UTC)