User talk:Susan.p.ashdown

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File:AFC-Logo_Decline.svgYour recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bradv was:

{{divbox|gray|3=This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:

{{divbox|blue|3=References need to be improved, and article needs general cleanup to conform to WP:MOS. All statements in a WP:BLP need to be properly sourced, and this article has large sections that don't have a reliable source.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Bradv 04:26, 13 April 2016 (UTC)

File:AFC-Logo.svg Susan Margaret Watkins, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
It very clearly shows notability under WP:PROF, on the basis of the honorary degree, and the textbooks, and possibly othr criteria The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. It does need improvement, as the previous reviewers have commented--specific sources are needed, links to other WP articles are needed. But it should never have been rejected for not meeting the MOS--these are things that can be fixed later.

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DGG ( talk ) 19:03, 25 April 2016 (UTC)