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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Corn Estate|Corn Estate]] (February 16)
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| Hello! Tgtotu,
I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Onel5969 (talk) 01:27, 16 February 2015 (UTC) |
Your draft article, [[Draft:Corn Estate]]
Hello, Tgtotu. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "Corn Estate".
The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply {{edit|Draft:Corn Estate|edit the submission}} and remove the {{tlc|db-afc}} or {{tlc|db-g13}} code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.
If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at WP:REFUND/G13. An administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.
Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 15:50, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
May 2021
File:Information orange.svg Please do not add promotional material to Wikipedia. While objective prose about beliefs, organisations, people, products or services is acceptable, Wikipedia is not a vehicle for soapboxing, advertising or promotion. Thank you.{{PAGENAME}} General Ization Talk 01:41, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
File:Information orange.svg Please do not add inappropriate external links to Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not a collection of links, nor should it be used for advertising or promotion. Inappropriate links include, but are not limited to, links to personal websites, links to websites with which you are affiliated (whether as a link in article text, or a citation in an article), and links that attract visitors to a website or promote a product. See the external links guideline and spam guideline for further explanations. Because Wikipedia uses the nofollow attribute value, its external links are disregarded by most search engines. If you feel the link should be added to the page, please discuss it on the associated talk page rather than re-adding it. Thank you.{{PAGENAME}} General Ization Talk 01:42, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
[[Draft:Amber Live!|Amber Live!]] moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Amber Live!, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. In addition there is a question of WP:UPE and WP:COI. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:
" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, and have addressed the UPE/COI issue, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Do not move the article into mainspace yourself.Onel5969 TT me 15:38, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
[[Draft:Roberto Serrini|Roberto Serrini]] moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Roberto Serrini, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:
" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. scope_creepTalk 16:44, 7 October 2021 (UTC)
Concern regarding [[Draft:Amber Live!]]
File:Information.svg Hello, Tgtotu. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Amber Live!, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 16:02, 8 December 2021 (UTC)
Concern regarding [[Draft:Roberto Serrini]]
File:Information.svg Hello, Tgtotu. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Roberto Serrini, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.
Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 10:14, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
Your draft article, [[Draft:Amber Live!]]
Hello, Tgtotu. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Amber Live!".
In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Requests_for_undeletion/G13?withJS=MediaWiki:G13-restore-wizard.js&page=Draft%3AAmber+Live%21 request its undeletion]. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.
Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 03:27, 3 July 2022 (UTC)
Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Amber Live!|Amber Live!]] (July 31)
{{divbox|gray|3=This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.|}}{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
{{clear}}
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Amber Live! and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not make any further changes to your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit§ion=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Amber_Live! Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Akevsharma&action=edit§ion=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Amber_Live! reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
Akevsharma (talk) 08:47, 31 July 2022 (UTC)
Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Amber Live!|Amber Live!]] (November 15)
{{divbox|gray|3=This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
- in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
- reliable
- secondary
- independent of the subject
Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:
{{divbox|blue|3=Most of the sources are standard announcements and other sources are not reliable (seem more like blogs). Also, seem to rely heavily on a single local publication, Seven Days.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
{{clear}}
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Amber Live! and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit§ion=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Amber_Live! Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:S0091&action=edit§ion=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Amber_Live! reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.
Managing a conflict of interest
File:Information.svg Hello, Tgtotu. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:
- avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
- propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (you can use the {{tl|request edit}} template);
- disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see Wikipedia:Conflict of interest#How to disclose a COI);
- avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see Wikipedia:Spam#External link spamming);
- do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.
In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.
Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you.{{#ifexpr: ({{#time: U | now}} - 1668799290) < 13150000 | {{PAGENAME}} | }} S0091 (talk) 19:21, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
[[WP:AfC|AfC]] notification: [[Draft:Amber Live!]] has a new comment
I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Amber Live!. Thanks! S0091 (talk) 14:18, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
:S0091 (talk) Thank you for your feedback and assistance on this article. I am trying to manage the COI as best I can in this case, and have done my best to comply with content policies and keep the article factual and neutral in tone. I have also provided a significant number of independent news resources as references for the article. The only other thing I can suggest would be to find an independent fan of the show to work on the article to provide additional verification of the material. Do I need to do that, or have I provided enough explanation here? Again, thank you for your help, @S0091 - @Tgtotu Tgtotu (talk) 14:55, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
::Hi Tgtotu, you need to declare your COI on your User page, see WP:COIDECLARE. You can of course continue to work on the draft but note you should not be editing articles directly if the content is about Amber Live!, House of LeMay or those affiliated. For example, your addition to Around the Sun (audio drama) is in violation of the COI guidelines which I removed as promotional. You need to make edit requests instead (instructions above in the COI message, see also WP:Edit Request Wizard) and the same is true if the draft is accepted. I will not review the draft again myself as I think getting a different set eyes is prudent. If you have questions or need help, you can ask at the Teahouse. On another note, I extend my sincere condolences for the loss of Margaurite LeMay. S0091 (talk) 15:27, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Amber Live!|Amber Live!]] (September 15)
{{divbox|gray|3=This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
- in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
- reliable
- secondary
- strictly independent of the subject
Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:
{{divbox|blue|3=Well done on creating the draft, and it may potentially meet the relevant requirements (including WP:GNG, WP:NCORP) but presently it is not clear that it does. As other reviewers have noted, Wikipedia's basic requirement for entry is that the subject is notable. Essentially subjects are presumed notable if they have received significant coverage in multiple published {{strong|secondary sources}} that are {{strong|reliable}}, intellectually independent of each other, and {{strong|independent of the subject}}. To properly create such a draft page, please see the articles ‘Your First Article’, ‘Referencing for Beginners’ and ‘Easier Referencing for Beginners’. Also, if you have any connection to the subject, including being paid, you have a conflict of interest that you must declare on your Talk page (to see instructions on how to do this please click the link). Please familiarise yourself with these pages before amending the draft. If you feel you can meet these requirements (it would be helpful if you could please identify, with specificity, which criteria you believe the draft meets?) then resubmit the page and leave a note for me on my talk page and I would be happy to reassess.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
{{clear}}
- If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Amber Live! and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
- If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
- If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Amber_Live! Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Cabrils&action=edit§ion=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Amber_Live! reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.