User talk:Tlupick

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{{divbox|blue|3=This article is very close to fulfiling the requirements of getting accepted as an article. Since this article is a WP:BLP all claims need to be cited, including that she is the cofounder of Insite. (first paragraph) Also, the last paragraph describes info about The Portland Hotel Society, which doesn't directly relate to Evans and should be removed (keep the article focused on Evans's biography). Feel free to ping me when the article is fixed and I'll review again.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Z1720 (talk) 17:54, 29 May 2021 (UTC)

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Z1720 (talk) 18:29, 29 May 2021 (UTC)