User talk:Zackbatzaya
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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Ana-Paula Correia|Ana-Paula Correia]] (November 8)
{{divbox|gray|3=This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:
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- "{{tq|She is an internationally recognized expert}}" Says whom?
- "{{tq|She is a leader in learning design, educational technology, and human-computer interaction.}} Say whom?
- "{{tq|As a cross-culturally competent researcher and designer, she emphasizes the importance of examining problems from multiple perspectives to avoid oversimplification and produce solutions that work best for users.}} We can't include our own analysis in articles, see wp:no original research.
Please add attribution for the opinions.
In addition, this draft is sourced to only non-independent sources(that is, sources that affiliated with the subject), contributing to the WP:NPOV problem.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Ca talk to me! 13:37, 8 November 2024 (UTC)
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Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Ana-Paula Correia|Ana-Paula Correia]] (January 15)
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Make sure your draft meets one of the criteria above before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If the subject does not meet any of the criteria, it is not suitable for Wikipedia.|}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 20:52, 15 January 2025 (UTC)
Your submission at [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|Articles for creation]]: [[Draft:Ana-Paula Correia|Ana-Paula Correia]] (May 12)
{{divbox|gray|3=This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.|}} The comment the reviewer left was:
{{divbox|blue|3=too much of the article is currently sourced to her own biography on the school website. Is there a source that isn't her own websites for any of this information? The first paragraph of Research also smells like OR because the only citations are papers she has done, nothing saying that the topics are related or what her focus is? Also selected publications should be underneath awards.}} Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.
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Moritoriko (talk) 04:51, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
[[WP:AfC|AfC]] notification: [[Draft:Ana-Paula Correia]] has a new comment
I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Ana-Paula Correia. Thanks! BuySomeApples (talk) 08:24, 29 May 2025 (UTC)
:I included the birth date in the cited text. It's a birth date, so it may not always be readily available online for citation because it's sensitive information. Thank you and I hope you understand. Zackbatzaya (talk) 15:10, 29 May 2025 (UTC)
::I just removed her birthday. For living people we require reliable sources for all information. DaffodilOcean (talk) 16:24, 29 May 2025 (UTC)
:::Got it. Thank you! I really appreciate it. Zackbatzaya (talk) 18:39, 29 May 2025 (UTC)