Wikipedia:Ambassadors/Editing Fridays/06-05-2011
Student articles needing cleanup:
:[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?oldid=427842669]
:[http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?oldid=427845410] <-- very nice.
:Removed about 50% as unref'd, see [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=427846836&oldid=427846631]
:Copied unref'd to talk page; can be added back w/ refs if possible
:Cleaned [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?oldid=427827021] -> [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?oldid=427851138]
Conservation Effects Assessment Project
:needs lists turned into prose
:I have done some. It needs references badly. {{oldid|Excessive bail|427846906|Doff}}
Native American Fish and Wildlife Society
Done all I could stomach: {{diff|Native American Fish and Wildlife Society|427847256|425823262|Diff}}
:Totally unreferenced, so it's hard to justify investing any more time in it for now.
: Changed to 'unreferenced'
: Per above - unref'd...can't do anything. Needs rewriting from sources, obv
Telecommunications policy of the United States
this article seems as if it was intentionally padded for length.
e.g. google
"Telecommunications policy is concerned with the"
"deemed essential that we have in place a dedicated network"
+close paraphrase e.g. [http://webcache.googleusercontent.com/search?q=cache:-QcQkLa8Cb0J:www.medical-answers.org/hd/index.php%3Ft%3DTelecommunication%2Bpolicy+%22FCC+derives+its+jurisdiction+to+facilitate+the+deployment%22&cd=2&hl=en&ct=clnk&gl=uk&client=firefox-a&source=www.google.co.uk]
[http://www.nojitter.com/blog/228800057] (Dec 9, 2010, verbatim copy)
- Needs thorough check of copyvio / close-paraphrasing; some may predate current edits
- that explains why the writing seemed terribly inconsistent
:Someone more knowledgeable on economics should probably read this over in a bit
Added some refs; honestly I'm too tired to learn this :P
::Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Economics#Utility-possibility_frontier