Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Kollegah discography/archive1

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:Nominator(s): Lee (talk) 12:49, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

I am nominating this discography that I completely revised, expanded, and neatened up. I used the Kanye West albums discography and Rihanna discography as inspiration. I hope it meats the FL requirements. Lee (talk) 12:49, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

{{hidden/FC|headerstyle=background:#ccf;|contentstyle=border:1px #ccf solid; padding:10px;|header=Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 19:04, 15 April 2018 (UTC)|content=Comments

• "five EPs" don't use the abbreviation without having the expanded version. {{Done}}
• " 38 Singles" no need for capital S and don't mix number formats in a single sentence for comparable items, per MOS:NUM. {{Done}}
• You link one album title but not the next, be consistent. {{Done}}
• "for the first time on number 48 on the" -> "and at number 48 on the". {{Done}}
• "peaked on number " at {{Done}}
• "Kollegah's third studio" presumably you mean his third solo studio album given this is the fourth studio album noted so far in the lead? {{Done}}
• "collaborated with German rapper Farid Bang" you've already mentioned (and linked) Bang, his nationality and his career choice. {{Done}}
• "two gold certifications; including a gold certification from the BVMI and one from the IFPI Austria"-> link certifications appropriately, and rephrase"two gold certifications: one from BVMI and one from IFPI Austria." {{Done}}
• " most-soled album to date" -> "best-selling" {{Done}}
• "In 2015, Kollegah released his fourth studio album Zuhältertape Volume 4" he's already released his fourth by this time... {{Done}}
• "second consecutive number one release ", "third consecutive number one release ", "fourth consecutive number one release " repetitive prose. {{Done}}
• " It's supported by three singles" avoid contractions, and this reads odd anyway, something like "It spawned three singles" or "Three singles were released from the album..." {{Done}}
• "certificate 8 days before it initial " -> "eight" and "its". {{Done}}
• Which territory does each release date relate to?
• "Put on the Index in June 2012.[10]" no full stop required. {{Done}}
• Don't overlink Bang in the tables. {{Done}}
• Mixtapes, EPs, samplers etc not mentioned in the lead at all.
• You need the – footer at the bottom of each table, not just the albums section tables. {{Done}}
• No ref for "Ich Represente". {{Done}}
• No ref for "Business Waffendeals" {{Done}}
• Music videos as featured artist section is missing references. {{Done}}
• Avoid SHOUTING in ref titles. {{Done}}
• Avoid spaced hyphens, use spaced en-dashes instead per MOS:DASH. {{Done}}
• Consistent date formats in the references please. {{Done}}

The Rambling Man (talk) 12:08, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

: I fixed the grammar mistakes and added references. I changed "-" to "–" and removed the uppercase titles. Removed unnecessary full stops. All date formats are consistent now (maybe I missed one) Physically all of his albums were released in Germany, Austria, and Switzerland on the same day.--Lirim.Z (talk) 13:51, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

:: Is where really the need to put all the eps and mixtapes in the lead? They didn't chart and are not really important for his discography.--Lirim.Z (talk) 17:10, 6 April 2018 (UTC)}}

{{hidden/FC|headerstyle=background:lightblue;|contentstyle=border:1px lightblue solid; padding:10px;|header=Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 22:33, 2 May 2018 (UTC)|content=Comments –

• In the first sentence, the first word of "Extended play" shouldn't be capitalized. {{Done}}
• BVMI should be spelled out in its first usage, with the abbreviated version in parentheses afterward. I don't think many non-Germans will know what that stands for off the top of their heads. {{Done}}
• In the last sentence of the lead, was the capitalization of "Jung, Brutal, Gutaussehend" meant to be different than what appears earlier? The others aren't capitalized after the first word. {{Done}}
• Note a needs a period at the end. {{Done}}
• Reference 1 needs an access date. {{Done}}
• The all caps in references 1, 22, 50, 51, 52, 57, 69, 79, 89, 94, 99, 100, 101, 107, 109, 110, and 113 should be removed. {{Done}}
• Hyphens in the titles of refs 1, 5, and 6 should be converted into en dashes. {{Done}} Giants2008 (Talk) 21:18, 1 May 2018 (UTC)}}

• Support – All of my concerns have been addressed adequately and I think this meets FL standards. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:33, 2 May 2018 (UTC)

: Thank you.--Lirim | T 18:24, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

{{hidden/FC|headerstyle=background:#ccf;|contentstyle=border:1px #ccf solid; padding:10px;|header=Resolved comments from Courcelles (talk) 18:23, 7 May 2018 (UTC)|content=*"Kollegah has sold more than 837,500 records." Source?

• "The critically acclaimed album" I see the sources for the certifications, but not for calling it "critically acclaimed"
• All the German sources need to have the "language=German" parameter added to their citation templates.

Otherwise, looks fine. Courcelles (talk) 16:06, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

:{{reply to|Courcelles}} "Kollegah has sold more than 837,500 records." is based on Music recording certification. So if i change the sentence to "Kollegah was awarded for sales of 837,500 records", would this be ok? If I use [http://www.laut.de/Kollegah/Alben/King-93173 this] source for "critically acclaimed", is this enough as one example? I'll add "language=German" to all the sources. Thank you for the comments.--Lirim | T 17:27, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

::My German sucks, but I think that would be acceptable, though two or three are always better for things like critically acclaimed. Courcelles (talk) 17:34, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

:::{{reply to|Courcelles}} So I added 2 sources, added "language=German" and changed the one sentence to "Kollegah was awarded for sales of 837,500 records in both Germany and Austria.".--Lirim | T 17:56, 7 May 2018 (UTC)}}

• Support Courcelles (talk) 18:23, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

: Thank you.--Lirim | T 18:24, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Scanning through- no ref for Golden Era Tourtape, "Straße 2"; several references use "Applemusic", rather than "Apple Music" like the others; many references use "YouTube" as a work/publisher, which is incorrect- YouTube is the site it's published on, but should be used as "via=YouTube" with the actual publisher in the "Publisher" field (for example, "Majoe feat. Kollegah & Farid Bang ► BADT ◄" is by Banger Musik), as YouTube itself had no hand in putting the video on the site, writing the description, owns the rights to the video itself, etc. --PresN 19:27, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

:{{reply to|PresN}} I added two sources and corrected your concerns.--Lirim | T 20:10, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

::Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 20:21, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

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