Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Welsh Premier League Golden Boot/archive1

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:Nominator(s): Kosack (talk) 19:36, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

A bit of a pet project for me in creating a Welsh Premier League list and attempting to take it to FL. The list is for the winners of the Golden Boot, for the top goalscorer each season and I believe it meets the FLC criteria. I look forward to any comments. Kosack (talk) 19:36, 11 June 2019 (UTC)

;Comments

• "before being rebranded as the Welsh Premier League in 2002" - this isn't mentioned (or sourced) in the body of the article
• "on 6 Janu2 1993" - think something's gone a bit awry there ;-)
• "Eifion Williams' won the Golden Boot" - stray apostrophe there
• "Eifion Williams goals-per-game ratio" - ah, this is where that apostrophe was meant to be ;-)
• "In 2004, the award was won by Andy Moran of Rhyl however, he" - comma should be before "however", not after
• "Griffiths' last win, during the 2011–12 season remains" - needs a comma after "season"
• Chris Summers link in the table points to a dab page
• Think that's it from me. Just little tweaks needed. Shame we don't have pictures of any of the players concerned.... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:36, 12 June 2019 (UTC)

:{{re|ChrisTheDude}} Thanks Chris for your review, I believe I've addressed all of the issues. The lack of images is a shame, I spent sometime trawling through Flickr in the hope of finding something but no luck. Kosack (talk) 10:15, 12 June 2019 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:30, 12 June 2019 (UTC)

;Comments

• I know it's in the infobox and main prose, but it might be nice to indicate the first year of the award in the lead. Something like this addition: "The award was created in 1993 for the inaugural season of the competition..."
• "outscoring his nearest competitor Andy Cole in the English Premier League by nine goals." Place commas after "competitor" and "League".
• "The award was subsequently given to the second highest scorer..." Make it "second-highest" with a hyphen.
• Change the Ref(s) column heading to {{Abbr|Ref(s)|Reference(s)}} (which looks like this: {{Abbr|Ref(s)|Reference(s)}} ).
• According to the "Awards won by club table", the award has been issued 29 times, not the 27 times indicated elsewhere.
• Refs 2, 4, & 10 (for example) are in sentence case, but refs 3, 5, & 6 (for example) are in title case. Chose one format and apply the same style to each (sentence case seems to be the most prevalent here).
• Everything else looks fine. NatureBoyMD (talk) 19:44, 12 June 2019 (UTC)

:{{re|NatureBoyMD}} Thanks for your review, I've fixed all of the issues raised above. A quick note to yourself and Chris The Dude, I've managed to secure an image from a Flickr user now in case either of you want to include it in your reviews, cheers. Kosack (talk) 12:29, 13 June 2019 (UTC)

::{{re|Kosack}} The above changes look good. Regarding the image, it needs alt text with the |alt= field and a period at the end the full sentence caption. One more thing I noticed, the "Awarded for" description immediately below it does not need a period as it is not a complete sentence. NatureBoyMD (talk) 13:19, 13 June 2019 (UTC)

:::{{re|NatureBoyMD}} Fixed those two issues now, cheers. Kosack (talk) 13:46, 13 June 2019 (UTC)

::::Support - Well done. NatureBoyMD (talk) 14:23, 13 June 2019 (UTC)

• Support – Looks good to me. Great job to you! Care to check out my FLC? – zmbro _(talk) 21:32, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

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