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Wikipedia:Featured portal candidates/Portal:Bristol

:The following is an archived discussion of a featured portal candidate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the portal's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured portal candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The portal was promoted by OhanaUnited at 19:43, 28 January 2016 (UTC) [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia%3AFeatured_portal_candidates%2FPortal%3ABristol&action=historysubmit&type=revision&diff=702150357&oldid=700903416].

=[[Portal:Bristol]]=

Bristol is a large city in the south west of England. I have recently updated this portal to randomly display content (45 selected article, 20 selected picture, 18 selected biography), added the recognised content from WikiProject Bristol and automated the category display. User:John of Reading has been very helpful in customising the layout (particularly the options at the bottom of each section). I now feel it meets the featured portal criteria and would appreciate any comments.— Rod talk 18:21, 10 September 2015 (UTC)

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;Comments from Harrias

  • All 45 selected articles are of Good or Featured quality, though only 8 of the selected biographies. Oddly, a few of the selected articles are in fact biographies: is there any reason for them being in the article, rather than biography section?
  • I have moved Blackbeard to biography (19). The only other one I can see is Murder of Joanna Yeates which is not really a biography it is an article about the murder investigation and its consequences. This leaves 2 copies of the info re Blackbeard. I tried to move Portal:Bristol/Selected article/45 to Portal:Bristol/Selected article/2 to fill the gap and stop the duplicate, however only an admin can do this as there is already an existing article - are you able to do this? If you can we will also need to change "Random portal component|max=45|header=Selected article| subpage=Selected article" to "Random portal component|max=44|header=Selected article| subpage=Selected article" in the main portal template to take account of there being one less article in this section.— Rod talk 17:01, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Done and done. Harrias talk 17:09, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • There appears to be a link to a Portal:South West England which doesn't exist, which doesn't look great, and given its lack of existence, labelling it a "parent portal" seems odd.
  • I've switched this to "Related Portals" & switched SW England -> Somerset.— Rod talk 13:51, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • The images are all relevant, of decent quality, and reasonably striking, with the possible exceptions of #18 (the tomb isn't as striking in this image as it probably really is and should be, it blends in a bit too much) and #19 (the building is cropped a bit too heavily, and is not level.)
  • Images 18 & 19 replaced.— Rod talk 17:19, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • The vastly varying lengths of the blurbs can cause some quite extreme imbalances between the two columns: could the blurbs lengths be made a more consistent length?
  • I have shortened some and lengthened others to try to resolve this, however the differences between the two columns do seem to vary slightly depending on screen resolution and size.— Rod talk 19:43, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Yeah, there will always be some fluctuation; as long as generally they're pretty close it's no problem. Harrias talk 19:45, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • It is affected by those which don't have photos, but some have been removed because "fair use" images can't be used in portals.— Rod talk 20:03, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • The blurb for Jennison Myrie-Williams needs updating, as he is apparently now "attached" (which is pretty odd ambiguous wording anyway).
  • Updated.— Rod talk 15:15, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • The St Mary Redcliffe quotes need a closing speech mark. Harrias talk 13:26, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • I'm not seeing this issue, although I have removed a stray apostrophe.— Rod talk 13:51, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • {{xt|as "the fairest, goodliest, and most famous parish church in England.}} There is a speech mark at the start, but not the end. Harrias talk 13:58, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • On my screen I see "the fairest, goodliest, and most famous parish church in England." with the closing speech mark.— Rod talk 15:15, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • How odd. I've just edited the page to add one, does yours now show two? Harrias talk 15:17, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • No. I'm looking at Portal:Bristol/Selected article/17 are you looking at a different sub page?— Rod talk 15:22, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Ha, yes, sorry! The Quotes bit at the bottom of the page: Portal:Bristol/Quotes. Harrias talk 15:23, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks we were looking at different sections. I will try to get to the other issues identified above asap.— Rod talk 15:28, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

I hope I have addressed the issues you raised. If you (or anyone else) have further comments I will try to address them.— Rod talk 19:43, 16 September 2015 (UTC)}}

Thanks Rod, this looks like great work to me, but I hope you won't mind if I wait for another set of eyes before confirming my support, as I don't have much previous experience reviewing Portals. Harrias talk 18:20, 25 September 2015 (UTC)

;Comments from SSTflyer (having arrived from my FPoC)

A few minor quibbles:

Support, anyway, since these issues are so trivial and only amount to typos. sst✈discuss 17:05, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

::*Thanks (and I've fixed the typos identified).— Rod talk 18:53, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

  • Support from an IP - Good work Rodw, nice portal! 1.52.124.206 (talk) 11:18, 2 January 2016 (UTC)
  • Support, nice look-and-feel of the portal SuperHero ● 👊 ● ★ 09:23, 21 January 2016 (UTC)

Closing as promoted. While there are concerns raised over some non-neutral notices posted on talk page, I believe these did not meet the threshold of canvassing and it did not appear to sway any votes in supporting of this nomination that would not otherwise. OhanaUnitedTalk page 19:41, 28 January 2016 (UTC)

:The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.