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Note: do not count Omaha, Nebraska for the WP:FAS count (for GA review, not PR) APR t 02:44, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Riley & Scott Mk III]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Riley & Scott Mk III|Ruhrfisch ><>°° 01:51, 1 October 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

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=[[Poole]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Poole|APR t 23:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style.[?]
  • This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.[?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
  • it has been
  • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: honour (B) (American: honor), harbour (B) (American: harbor), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), meter (A) (British: metre), metre (B) (American: meter), organise (B) (American: organize), recognise (B) (American: recognize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization), programme (B) (American: program ).
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 23:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Los Angeles, California]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Los Angeles, California|APR t 23:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Avoid including galleries in articles, as per Wikipedia:Galleries. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 69 km, use 69 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 69&nbsp;km.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), please spell out source units of measurements in text; for example, the Moon is 380,000 kilometres (240,000 mi) from Earth.[?] Specifically, an example is 080 ft.
  • As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), avoid using special characters (ex: &+{}[]) in headings.
  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style.[?]
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 23:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Andrew Crofts (footballer)]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Andrew Crofts (footballer)|APR t 23:47, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

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=[[Rock Band]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Rock Band|APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.[?]
  • The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
  • Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout.[?]
  • The script has spotted the following contractions: won't, won't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[List of Calgary Flames general managers]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of Calgary Flames general managers|APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.[?]
  • You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 1(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.[?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Louvre]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Louvre|APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
  • Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout.[?]
  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style.[?]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: neighbor (A) (British: neighbour), neighbour (B) (American: neighbor), metre (B) (American: meter), organize (A) (British: organise), ization (A) (British: isation), jewelry (A) (British: jewellery), jewellery (B) (American: jewelry).
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[The National Conference Center]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|The National Conference Center|APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

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=[[Colton Point State Park]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Colton Point State Park|APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
  • Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 800 feet , use 800 feet , which when you are editing the page, should look like: 800&nbsp;feet .[?]
  • This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.[?]
  • The script has spotted the following contractions: can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Feeder]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Feeder|APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

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=[[Matsudaira clan]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Matsudaira clan|APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Avoid including galleries in articles, as per Wikipedia:Galleries. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to [http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page wikicommons] or integrating images with the text.[?]
  • You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
  • Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at Wikipedia:Guide to layout.[?]
  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style.[?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Rickey Henderson]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Rickey Henderson|APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.[?]
  • The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 3DG, use 3 DG, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 3&nbsp;DG.[?]
  • This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail.[?]
  • The script has spotted the following contractions: haven't, won't, can't, isn't, didn't, didn't, don't, don't, don't, don't, isn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:30, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Pallid sturgeon]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Pallid sturgeon|APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.[?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
  • apparently
  • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Quark]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Quark|APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • The script has spotted the following contractions: can't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
  • Please provide citations for all of the {{fact}}s.[?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Melbourne]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Melbourne|APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.[?]
  • The lead is for summarizing the rest of the article, and should not introduce new topics not discussed in the rest of the article, as per WP:LEAD. Please ensure that the lead adequately summarizes the article.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 8 km, use 8 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 8&nbsp;km.[?]
  • Per WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long – consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per Wikipedia:Summary style.[?]
  • There are a few occurrences of weasel words in this article- please observe WP:AWT. Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
  • it has been
  • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper citations (if they already do, or are not weasel terms, please strike this comment).[?]
  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: recognize (A) (British: recognise), recognise (B) (American: recognize), realise (B) (American: realize), ization (A) (British: isation), isation (B) (American: ization).
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • The script has spotted the following contractions: wasn't, if these are outside of quotations, they should be expanded.
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Rhinemaidens (Wagner)]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Rhinemaidens (Wagner)|APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
  • You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Holywell, Eastbourne]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Holywell, Eastbourne|APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
  • Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
  • If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
  • You may wish to consider adding an appropriate infobox for this article, if one exists relating to the topic of the article. [?] (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 400 metres, use 400 metres, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 400&nbsp;metres.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.[?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Temporal terms like “over the years”, “currently”, “now”, and “from time to time” often are too vague to be useful, but occasionally may be helpful. “I am now using a semi-bot to generate your peer review.”
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Meads]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Meads|APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
  • Consider adding more links to the article; per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (links) and Wikipedia:Build the web, create links to relevant articles.[?]
  • If there is not a free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space - &nbsp; between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 80nm, use 80 nm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 80&nbsp;nm.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
  • Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
  • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, APR t 01:32, 29 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[The O.C. (season 3)]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|The O.C. (season 3)|APR t 03:40, 27 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

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=[[Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan|APR t 03:40, 27 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Please make the spelling of English words consistent with either American or British spelling, depending upon the subject of the article. Examples include: aluminum (A) (British: aluminium), defense (A) (British: defence), organize (A) (British: organise), realize (A) (British: realise), ization (A) (British: isation), counterattack (A) (British: counter-attack), cosy (B) (American: cozy), programme (B) (American: program ).
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]

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=[[Lancaster Barnstormers]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Lancaster Barnstormers|APR t 03:40, 27 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

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=[[Interstate 82]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Interstate 82|APR t 03:40, 27 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

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=[[Bad Blood (2004)]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|Bad Blood (2004)|APR t 03:40, 27 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

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=[[List of PGA Championship champions]]=

{{#ifeq:{{{name}}}|List of PGA Championship champions|APR t 03:40, 27 September 2008 (UTC)}}The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
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:*I'm not sure what appropriate info box should go in this article. H1nkles (talk) 20:01, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

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:* Done. H1nkles (talk) 14:57, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

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:* Done H1nkles (talk) 15:00, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

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:* Done but could always use more checking, there are a lot of words to read. H1nkles (talk) 15:07, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

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=[[John Marshall Harlan II]]=

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=[[College Republicans]]=

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=[[Bad Blood (2003)]]=

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=[[2008 Chatsworth train collision]]=

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=[[Celebrity Big Brother racism controversy]]=

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=[[Chiprovtsi]]=

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=[[Beecher's Handmade Cheese]]=

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=[[The Living End discography]]=

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=[[Bunnies & Burrows]]=

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=[[List of The Bellflower Bunnies episodes]]=

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=[[Napoleon I of France]]=

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=[[Juno (film)]]=

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=[[Pokémon Red and Blue]]=

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=[[Louvre Abu Dhabi]]=

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=[[Qu'Appelle, Saskatchewan]]=

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:*This point still comes up, added quite a few wikilinks, will see about adding more citations as well.

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=[[Gillingham F.C. records]]=

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=[[Stamata Revithi]]=

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=[[Gila Monster]]=

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=[[Harvey Milk]]=

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=[[Augie March]]=

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=[[Discography of Final Fantasy XII]]=

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=[[2007–08 Pittsburgh Penguins season]]=

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=[[Curtis Woodhouse]]=

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=[[Djibril Cissé]]=

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=[[Armageddon (2006)]]=

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=[[Category 6: Day of Destruction]]=

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=[[Volcanism on Io]]=

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=[[Guadalupe-Nipomo Dunes]]=

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=[[Hard Justice (2008)]]=

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=[[Mark of the Year]]=

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=[[Lakeside Apartments District, Oakland, California]]=

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=[[Aaron Eckhart]]=

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=[[Australian Football League]]=

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=[[Sleep medicine]]=

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=[[New York Giants seasons]]=

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=[[Davenport, Iowa]]=

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=[[Germanium]]=

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=[[Tyrannosauridae]]=

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=[[Randall Flagg]]=

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=[[Osteochondritis dissecans]]=

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=[[Chase Promenade]]=

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  • Done.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 02:17, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
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=[[AT&T Plaza]]=

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  • Got it.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 02:05, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
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=[[Warner Bros. and J. K. Rowling vs. RDR Books]]=

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=[[Ricki-Lee discography]]=

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=[[Rewrite (visual novel)]]=

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=[[Institut Le Rosey]]=

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=[[Tiësto]]=

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=[[Frank Zappa]]=

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=[[WXKW]]=

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=[[Iyer]]=

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=[[Larry O'Brien Championship Trophy]]=

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=[[Steve Bruce]]=

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=[[Shawn Michaels]]=

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=[[Lockdown (2008)]]=

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=[[Legal disputes over Harry Potter]]=

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=[[Samurai Girl (book series)]]=

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=[[Maguire v SOCOG 1999]]=

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=[[Guitar Hero]]=

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=[[Music of Chicago]]=

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=[[List of UEFA club competition winners]]=

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=[[Charlie Sheen]]=

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=[[System Shock 2]]=

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=[[2008 ACC Championship Game]]=

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=[[List of D.Gray-man chapters]]=

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=[[Radon]]=

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=[[Alan Dale]]=

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=[[Slovenian presidential election, 2007]]=

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=[[The Office (U.S. TV series) season 4]]=

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=[[List of UEFA Intertoto Cup winners]]=

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=[[United Nations list of Non-Self-Governing Territories]]=

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=[[List of The Office (U.S. TV series) episodes]]=

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=[[Jamie Stuart]]=

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=[[Homer Simpson]]=

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=[[Mark Stimson]]=

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=[[Really Achieving Your Childhood Dreams]]=

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=[[Roman Catholic Church]]=

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::I have examined the article for these items and corrected where found. On the issue of article length, which most of these comments pertain to, it has been discussed and consensus found among editors that the subject matter of the article warrants a longer page as indicated at WP:article size. NancyHeise talk 17:02, 26 September 2008 (UTC)

=[[Philitas of Cos]]=

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=[[Topkapı Palace]]=

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=[[Léon M'ba]]=

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=[[Richard II of England]]=

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=[[Jeff White]]=

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=[[List of micronations]]=

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=[[University of Cambridge]]=

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=[[Los Angeles Lakers seasons]]=

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=[[List of people with hepatitis C]]=

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