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{{User:Dendodge/AfDlinks|1="The Beatles"|2="The Beatles"}}

I've listed this article for peer review because it is possibly one of the most important articles we have. It is the core article for a WikiProject, has been selected for the CD release, and it one of the most visited articles on Wikipedia. This hasn't been to FAC for 4 years, so I think it's time we gave it another chance. How can I improve it?

Thanks, Dendodge Talk^Contribs 20:46, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

;Comments

• Split off the History section to its own article, like History of The Beatles, and then summarize that back into this article.
• Rename "Influence on popular culture" to "Legacy" and expand that section with more on how they affected future music.
• Move the prose from "Discography" to The Beatles discography and just keep the studio album list.

Gary King (talk) 20:52, 16 November 2008 (UTC)