Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 December 2

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Hello, This is my first article submission. Please provide feedback if possible. thanks alot.

Robert Filyk

Intueri (talk) 04:47, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

:The article currently has no references. Without them, the article is likely to just get deleted, so please try and add some. WP:CITE, WP:Reliable references and WP:VRS should all be useful pages. Chevymontecarlo 16:26, 3 December 2010 (UTC)

My first page submission, so I'm using the "workspace" instead of directly posting it. I have additional content to add, which I will do in the next few days... but I'm getting syntax errors related to references, and I need some guidance determining the correct way to display a link vs a reference.

This topic has links to bunches of other wiki documents, but none of them really explore this particular issue entirely -- this one specifically, as is a "conjunction" of multiple government programs with a lot of details.

-JM- (talk) 07:41, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

I am looking to replace the current article on the Sinyavsky–Daniel trial with this English-sourced and expanded draft. I am not sure what the policy here would be. My draft includes all the information of the current article, but can I just replace it?

Nkrita (talk) 13:05, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

:Yes, you can do that. In the future (if you want) you can edit articles like that directly in the regular article. WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:03, 5 December 2010 (UTC)

Please have a look at the article I wrote about GlobalCollect

Marky555 (talk) 14:56, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

I would appreciate feedback on whether I have laid out the article correctly, and how to add RII as another 'relative risk' measure in the categories (it should appear alongside risk ratio (RR).

S9901470 (talk) 16:51, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

:It looks pretty good now. I fixed the section headings to comply with WP:ACCESS.

:I'm not sure what your concern is with the category listings. It all looks correct. WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:08, 5 December 2010 (UTC)

Libertars (talk) 17:08, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

I'm hoping to have the article reviewed so that "unreviewed article" template can be taken off the top. It's about the national men's sailing championship.

Racerchaser (talk) 19:12, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

:{{tick|18}} {{ucfirst:Done}}, but you need to find some WP:Independent sources, or the article may eventually be deleted as not WP:Notable. WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:39, 6 December 2010 (UTC)

Ncboy2010 (talk) 21:37, 2 December 2010 (UTC)

:It looks pretty good. I'm not a fan of "media" sections in city articles, but if you're going to have such a thing, then you should probably include the local newspaper.

:You might find more ideas for expansion at Wikipedia:WikiProject Cities/US Guideline. WhatamIdoing (talk) 07:16, 5 December 2010 (UTC)