Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 November 21

Hi, This is my first article. It's on my dad, but I believe my content avoids conflict of interest and I believe I have credible sources. Thanks

Aldoleopold (talk) 03:06, 21 November 2010 (UTC)

I am a bit of a collector of the furniture talked about in my article. Over the years when I have been doing research I was surprised that there was no reference to the manufacturer or to the things his company created on Wikipedia. That was the reason for my attempt at starting a train of thought in that direction.

I guess my main question is about how I did with the references and the links to off-site content.

I will wait until after I receive some feedback to add some digital images.

Thanks.

Alzabees (talk) 03:18, 21 November 2010 (UTC)

It is about the basic terminology of information security, often confused.

Pastore Italy (talk) 22:05, 21 November 2010 (UTC)

Hi; would just like some feedback or comments on http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cmcenerney/ourstage before I make the page live. Any comments or thoughts are most welcome!

Cmcenerney (talk) 23:10, 21 November 2010 (UTC)

:It's a good article from a formatting perspective but I do think you need to work on adding more reliable references from third-party sources, as at the moment most of the references are just from the official site, rather than websites not affiliated with the article's subject. Chevymontecarlo - alt 17:45, 25 November 2010 (UTC)

Trying to publish this traffic flow theory assumption that is made quietly in many theories.

Dzzzmcgzzz (talk) 00:00, 22 November 2010 (UTC)