Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 June 19

Dlungwana (talk) 02:14, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

Hi, i really need feedback on this article, boron group, which I have brought from a stub to a C-class. I would like to see what is missing for B-class and how I could improve it further. Thanks!

Geo7777 (talk) 07:05, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

:It probably already meets the 'B Class' criteria. I'm not familiar with the subject but it appears to be well-written and comprehensive. -Cntras (talk) 04:17, 20 June 2011 (UTC)

Have added references and a TON of information from reliable sources (or at least they seemed pretty credible to me). No blogs or anything like that. My goal is to just have that message go away so the page is music certifiable.

Mstraciecc (talk) 08:36, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

14.96.112.32 (talk) 13:52, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

please add the artical petra in kannada version

Ewatt26 (talk) 14:42, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

Please add Article Feedback to the article on si.wiki

112.135.27.178 (talk) 15:33, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

Hi am a long time follower of rock music and the band killing joke in particular and also the work of DJ Ro Ashika ;have found as many links as possible to emphasize how important Dj Ro is as both a dj for killing joke and as an acoustic artist revered by killing Joke fans (Gatherers); please can you give me feedback and help to upload this as a finished artcle

Shan sandy (talk) 17:12, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the references are improperly formatted.

K8smash (talk) 17:47, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

:They are. You need the name of the template immediately after the open double curly braces. Instead of {{|title= blah}} use something like {{cite news |title= blah |newspaper= Austin Chronicle |date= January 15, 2010 }} see {{T|cite news}} for newspapers, {{T|cite book}} for books, and {{T|cite web}} for other web sources. Congratulations on trying to use them; the group seems notable, so after working on the article some more it should be publishable.You also need to use wikilinks in the body for related topics that have articles. For example, my guess is that it is in Austin, Texas? If so, state it clearly, maybe in the lead. W Nowicki (talk) 17:25, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Please send feedback regarding a new article concerning French singer and fashion journalist Marie-Jacques Perrier. Thank you for your time and interest.

82.230.181.101 (talk) 19:25, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

Hi, I've seen you're article on Marie-Jaques Perrier and I removed the tag for a new article. It seems good enough to not qualify for speedy deletion, so your article is safe for the time being. You have to watch out though, because new articles, and especially biographies will be deleted if it has not enough references. It looks OK, and I will rate it as start class. When it gets larger (more content, references...) We can see if it it could qualify for C-class in the future. If you have any questions or comments feel free to ask on my talk page with the link below. By the way, i almost forgot, if you could take the time to look at this article, Boron group, a chemistry article, and put you're comments for it and if you want to compare it to a B-class article in chemistry even though it's a C-class article, i'm trying to get it for B-class. Good job though! --Geo7777 (talk) 11:38, 20 June 2011 (UTC)

New Article that needs Reviewing

:Looks fine. Picture should be moved to the intro/lead. Wikifan^{Be nice} 07:19, 20 June 2011 (UTC)

Jcpriestley (talk) 21:40, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

Seeking review to remove unreviewed newly created notice from the top of the article.

3en (talk) 23:15, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

This is my first article. All comments are welcome. It would also be useful to know how to upload pdf documents, as reference material. Please and thank you.

Xave2000 (talk) 23:48, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

This is my first article. All comments are welcomed. It would also be helpful to know how to upload PDF documents, whihc I can use as reference material. Thx!

Xave2000 (talk) 23:52, 19 June 2011 (UTC)

I wrote this article (my first ever!) and now it is live. I would like it reviewed. Thank you.

Mtstaffa (talk) 03:20, 20 June 2011 (UTC)