Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 March 17

I added facts and description supported by outside sources. I'm pretty new at this, and would appreciate any constructive criticism. Thanks!

Rangmaker (talk) 00:13, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

New article- needs to be reviewed for unbiasedness.

Eca255 (talk) 00:33, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

please publish this page.

The table info (the code) came off of one of my Gables Engineering parts diagram.

most aircraft control heads use this code.

I could not find it listed anywhere on the net. this is not 'two-of-five code' which was used by the telcos.

thks

Phoenixcomm (talk) 02:33, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

:Greetings, the page as you linked it is not currently ready for publishing. The main things it lacks are a lede (WP:LEDE), which establishes the subject and gives a short summary that any layman could understand. The article's references are also to sites like Ask.com, which is not a reliable source (WP:RS). Try instead to find at least one or two reliable sources from news sites, GoogleBooks, or from a page belonging to a recognised official entity in the engineering field. Feel free to post back here with any questions, MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:00, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

I am in need of some help in the formatting department. I would really enjoy some constructive help. Thank you.

Bakerdu2 (talk) 03:25, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I've given it a tidy up. I see it's been declined by 'articles for creation' but that you've done more work on it since. Try to gather more references from places other than msuspartans, which I don't think would be considered an independant source. You'll need to get enough references to show that Keane meets the notability guidelines. Good luck, --Physics is all gnomes (talk) 17:43, 18 March 2011 (UTC)

Please let me know any feedback you have on this page about a popular DJ. Thanks!

Nealslush (talk) 04:32, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Sandy ts2k (talk) 11:08, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Sandy ts2k (talk) 12:14, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Sandy ts2k (talk) 12:18, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Please review this article and approve if accurate.

Thanks!

Sjohnson5 (talk) 18:36, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

This is a brief description of a software project that has been around for a number of years, and has achieved sufficient maturity to warrant a 1.0 release. Since this is my first submitted article, I have kept this in my sandbox for the time-being.

Also, for the sake of transparency, I go by 'ergonlogic' in the Drupal (and thus Aegir) community. I am a junior contributor to the project, and work for one of the organizations (Koumbit, a non-profit, btw) who are amongst those leading this community project. I have carefully read the WP:COI page, and don't feel that I am contravening any of those guidelines.

Thanks in advance for your feedback and guidance.

Socrates32 (talk) 21:06, 17 March 2011 (UTC)