Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 12

This is my first post - I cited references for all of the information on the page. Please let me know if I need to make any changes.

Thanks!

Smetana.sam (talk) 00:40, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

I want to elevate this article - the subject is notable and interesting, but I'm struggling with trying to put her in the context of theatre/activism in the 21st Century. It's a new field and one that, in my view, merits expansion.

Webberkenny (talk) 16:55, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

I've created this article about the poet Charles Raffery, but I am not sure what the next step is. Can anyone help me?

Johnparish66 (talk) 17:13, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

Applejack88 (talk) 20:20, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

Comments?

Kmcnab1s (talk) 21:30, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

:Well written. I'm glad to see someone finally wrote about this interesting individual. Roxie1234 (talk) 21:31, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

::Flagged as a blatant hoax. MikeWazowski (talk) 22:06, 12 November 2011 (UTC)

Shinobu Ito is a Japanese Jazz / Fusion guitarist who immigrated to the USA in 1977. His new musical aspects and challenges not only as a Jazz guitarist are all quite interesting.

Druker123 (talk) 22:35, 12 November 2011 (UTC)