Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 6

Please review my article about Danya Ruttenberg. Thanks.

Dante8 (talk) 15:53, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

Please review my article on Mindy Jacobsen. Thanks.

Dante8 (talk) 17:22, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

Although it has been a few months since I created this beach soccer article, I would still like it to be reviewed.

Jab7842 (talk) 17:33, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

Although it has been a few months since I created this beach soccer article, I would still like it to be reviewed.

Jab7842 (talk) 17:33, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

Although it has been a few months since I created this essay, I would still like it to be reviewed.

Jab7842 (talk) 17:33, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

DavidLevine UTC (talk) 18:54, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

I have created an article (my first ever) for an album called Misty Medley by the band Kiss Me Deadly. An article of this name was apparently speedily deleted (A9) in 2009. The band itself does not have a WP entry and none of its songs or the album itself appear to have made it onto any major chart. However, several of the musicians involved do have individual WP pages, and the album itself has received substantial critical coverage, which I have noted and referenced.

Some areas that I plan to improve in the article:

• The Reception section needs to be converted from a mass of quotes into a proper summary. I also hope to use this process to build up the lead a bit more.
• Needs a picture of the album cover.

Hobbes Goodyear (talk) 20:35, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

Although I didn't create this article, Caperspark made [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=FIFA_Beach_Soccer_World_Cup_qualification_(AFC)&diff=444541169&oldid=444410622 this edit] that was reverted, which synchronized the results table in FIFA Beach Soccer World Cup qualification (AFC) with FIFA Beach Soccer World Cup qualification (CAF), FIFA Beach Soccer World Cup qualification (CONCACAF), FIFA Beach Soccer World Cup qualification (CONMEBOL), FIFA Beach Soccer World Cup qualification (OFC), and FIFA Beach Soccer World Cup qualification (UEFA). I think [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=FIFA_Beach_Soccer_World_Cup_qualification_(AFC)&diff=444541169&oldid=444410622 this edit] shouldn't have been reverted, so I would like [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=FIFA_Beach_Soccer_World_Cup_qualification_(AFC)&diff=444541169&oldid=444410622 this edit] to be reviewed.

Jab7842 (talk) 21:35, 6 November 2011 (UTC)