Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 22

I'd like to have someone read over this article and let me know if it needs anything more...

Ncboy2010 (talk) 00:34, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if my previous message was linked properly to my user page. My question is that I would like to have some feedback about my article. I have tried to link my facts to relieable sources. Thank-you.

LiSiAm (talk) 00:48, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Please review this article

NAVEEN (talk) 08:41, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

This is a new article and the first article I've contributed to Wikipedia. Feedback is appreciated.

Natural (talk) 13:56, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Just want to make sure I get feedback.Vchimpanzee · talk · contributions · 16:26, 22 October 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing this wiki

Imc5howl (talk) 03:42, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

It has not been widely publicized that the final amount which came up on the MDA toteboard in the final seconds of the Telethon was predetermined by MDA officals weeks before the Telethon aired. This can be verified by an Administrative Assistant charged with typing and editing the press release prior to the Telethon and, in additional to other MDA employees, particularly former Public Affairs Manager Jim Brown. Mr. Brown told his staff that this had been done for years to ensure that each year the final amount went up, even though logically it was not likely. 72.201.105.172 (talk) 14:20, 23 October 2011 (UTC)