Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 3

My article has been done to the best of my ability. Why are references incorrect?

Aweaver2 (talk) 01:58, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Was missing {{tl|reflist}} in footer. Added. However, your referencing needs more work, please see WP:REF for info. Ma®©usBritish ^{[Chat • RFF]} 03:31, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

My recent revision of article for the review is linked with article already I had sumitted in june 2011. please approve the latest. K.John mathew, pastor Origin of malankara Church of God Thrikkannamangal.

59.93.2.236 (talk) 02:40, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

See: Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 15#Origin of Malankara Church of God Thrikkannamangal

Ma®©usBritish ^{[Chat • RFF]} 03:27, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Please help me review the page.

Bonvallite (talk) 03:32, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Hi. I have re-written an article about the backup software SOS Online Backup with all the available and googled infos, please check the differences here [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=SOS_Online_Backup&action=historysubmit&diff=452677565&oldid=414660158]. I have applied for the review on 26th October but there was a small issue with my signature not representing my user name hence i'm reapplying for the request.

Pearll'sSun^TALK 04:23, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

:{{approved|Reviewed by}} Ma®©usBritish ^{[Chat • RFF]} 09:37, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

• Tone is promotional, needs to be more neutral/objective.
• References do not account for notability sufficiently:

:*Too many self-published references, creates COI.

:*PCMag, NYT, Notebook review are trivial mentions/recommendations, not full reviews.

• Wikipedia:Notability (software) gives advice on creating this type article.

Please review this new page.

Please address any problems in the usual responsible-editing way.

I have two particular areas that I would appreciate help or advice with;

1) the irritatingy-visible tags around the photo in the infobox

2) I have a discography, but it's very long. Is there a bot that might help fill in (or filter) the discography?

Catafalque (talk) 13:33, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

AcademicBusinessReseach: I've created a page describing the British Journal of Management as part of WikiProject Academic Journals. At the moment I thinkk that this is a 'stub', so any advice that you could give me on how best to expand the entry would be much appreciated. Many thanks.

AcademicBusinessResearch (talk) 14:05, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

I added a new article on poet and playwright Sharon Bridgforth and would like it to be reviewed. Bridgforth is an award-winning published author and has had her work performed all over the country.

Thank you.

Thisiskes (talk) 17:35, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Helpful hints are welcome.

Stonnman (talk) 19:07, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Leelabratee (talk) 20:24, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Thank you very much for helping me know how to reformat, do the footnoted references more properly, etc.

Nipporica (talk) 21:18, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Please review and provide feedback.

Jeandware (talk) 22:36, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Please could you review my article and give me some feedback?

Josepemacdonald (talk) 22:57, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Just need to make sure the article is legit. Thanks!

Nikolahicks (talk) 23:34, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

It is about the school on Jefferson Highway in Jefferson, Louisiana.

ToranL7231 (talk) 23:46, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Franspinale (talk) 00:00, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

Very confusing. I logged in first, then made my feedback request, then was told I was NOT logged in. So I logged in again, then it seems I need to repeat my request here. So I do, with my apology if it is a repeat.

Faustus III 08:31, 7 October 2011 (UTC)