Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 13

This is my first article in WP. This article is about the Office add-ins Classic Menu for Office, which can bring the toolbars and menus of Office 2003 in Office 2007 and Office 2010. Any feedback is welcome. Thank you very much.

Jaychivo (talk) 10:45, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

I recently updated the page Embassy of the United States in Israel with more detailed information about the history, Embassy sections, and other notable information. I appreciate your feedback.

Greener3 (talk) 11:06, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

After receiving the ok on the article and its sources in the user space I have moved it. If someone could review it once more to give it the final ok and remove the template, it would be much appreciated. Thank you.

Lou.garay (talk) 12:40, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

{{done}} – Ma®©usBritish ^[talk] 21:35, 14 September 2011 (UTC)

Danielbrita (talk) 14:57, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

This is my first article and I want to ensure it is impartial and informative. Please let me know and thank you for the help!

Dayh04 (talk) 16:18, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

Wynkyn (talk) 16:42, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

This page needs additional clean up. Note: I did not create this page, I just came across it and removed the bolding, but I am having trouble fixing sentence structure and finding more sources for this animal disease. Thanks.

Tinton5 (talk) 16:43, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

This is my first article in Wikipedia. This article is about the State Wide area Network(SWAN), which is one of the core infrastructure components under NeGP. Any feedback is welcome. Thank you very much.

Hariom21 (talk) 17:15, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

:Many issues, but might be salvaged. The name is not per our conventions for starters. See WP:TITLE. We do not put acronyms in parentheses after titles. It needs context in the lead to say what state it is talking about. Needs more wikilnks and less jargon. Needs to clear if it ever really happened, after being approved six years ago. Independent sources would be nice. I really wish you would have waited for feedback before publishing. W Nowicki (talk) 22:29, 16 September 2011 (UTC)

I would like some feedback for this article, as I have recently re-created it with verified real-world content, asserting it's notability since it had previously been merged.

Tellow (talk) 19:10, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

I would like help assuring that this article meets all guidelines.

Oil lady (talk) 19:12, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

This article about a Nasheed artist Mesut Kurtis was previously deleted due to notability. However since then he has released another album which is available on Amazon.com and iTunes. It has now been written as a stub from a NPOV from reliable sources. Request a review and feedback for any amendments needed, regards.

Tanbircdq (talk) 20:53, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

Kaptein kaliber are a legitimate group that i am trying to research. I ahve two of their CDs and I am nothing to do with them (honest). Sounds like they have been around for a while and are quite widely published. Hope the article is Ok- this is my first one. hopefully the first of many obscure topics I wish to raise. I would like to get this added as a wikipedia article. Not sure how- I moved it but have heard nothing back since.

Lunarbot (talk) 21:13, 13 September 2011 (UTC)

I'd like to have the request for approval removed to clean up the article. Should I also add the Broadbean disambiguation page since there is now more than one?

Timtempleton (talk) 00:23, 14 September 2011 (UTC)