Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 8

Can you please help me with the references and External Links? Thank you.

Mbehm1978 (talk) 04:04, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

i am not good in editing , can any one help me to do necessary changes to my article

Shukkoorpc (talk) 11:29, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

I am not good writing , can any one help me to do necessary changes to my article

Grafikart 13:44, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Just trying to understand on your information listed considering artifacts from

the Titanic from the ocean floor. When at the Luxor in Las Vegas they state they

have part of a ship wall from the Titanic?

24.12.26.117 (talk) 15:41, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Hello, this is a feedback request for an expanded article on U.S. rhythmic gymnast Julie Zetlin. I have added an infobox; wikified terms; and rewritten the lede. I would like to request that this article be reviewed, with an eye toward whether the wikification tag can be removed. Thanks so much.

Seandalytx (talk) 17:12, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Reference is made to operation in http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/US_Wars without an existing article.

Hippypaul 17:40, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Request for review and removal of the unreviewed-article tag. In response to a reviewer suggestion, I've added additional external references. Thank you!

Jmugge (talk) 17:50, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Hi

Just want to check check I have the formatting correct.

Thank you

Shango3000 (talk) 18:33, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

This page is one for an upcoming model. There not much information at the moment, but she is destined to be big, so this is just a start. All the info is completely accurate as im in touch with ms robinson herself. however, if you could kindly pitch in what i could add for this article? or what the page is missing. also, i can't seem to move the page as it says my im too "new", or i may be "blocked". So when exactly would i be able to move this article?

thankyou for your time

xxx

Larxs (talk) 18:51, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

:{{resolved}} Please read :WP:UPANDCOMING and :WP:BIO, as well as :WP:COI. --Orange Mike | Talk 21:06, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

looking to finally complete the listing that I have placed on Wikipedia. Followed all the suggestions and now would love to have this finalized

Ren6967 (talk) 21:45, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Ren6967 (talk) 21:46, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Feronia Inc. page requires feedback

207.219.37.98 (talk) 00:59, 9 September 2011 (UTC)