Wikipedia talk:Featured article review/Sex Pistols/archive2

• Coon 1976, p. unknown. Why is page unknown? There are ways to fix the citation, using loc= ... depending on what the issue is. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:53, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
• Messed up ? Not sure what it is? Reid, Jamie (June 2004). "The Art of Punk". Archived from the original on 6 December 2008. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:58, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

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• Bare URL in citation (maybe intending to change to something else) ? https://www.discogs.com/release/2095848-Sex-Pistols-The-Very-Best-Of-Sex-Pistols-And-We-Dont-Care SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC) {{done}} SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:27, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
• Remove ???
• Southall, Brian (2007). The Sex Pistols: 90 Days at EMI. Omnibus Press. ISBN 978-1-84609-779-9. Harv warning: There is no link pointing to this citation. The anchor is named CITEREFSouthall2007.
• Eglinton, Mark (30 July 2009). "Bringing Out the Dead: The New York Dolls on Their Highs and Lows". The Quietus. Retrieved 3 August 2010. Harv warning: There is no link pointing to this citation. The anchor is named CITEREFEglinton2009.
• Klein, H. (1978). "Sex Pistols: Tour Notes". New York Rocker (February). Harv warning: There is no link pointing to this citation. The anchor is named CITEREFKlein1978. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:56, 18 October 2023 (UTC) {{done}} SandyGeorgia (Talk) 14:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

; Lead

• making it the most censored records in British history. ... does this want to be singular, or "one of the" (plural)? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:17, 18 October 2023 (UTC) {{done}} SandyGeorgia (Talk) 14:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

; Formation

• occasionally worked at 'Too Fast to Live, Too Young to Die', ... why is it in single quotes here, but not in the para above? Remove quotes? {{done}} SandyGeorgia (Talk) 14:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

; Lydon joins

• Lydon later said that early-seventies Britain was "a very depressing place ... the close quote is missing ... not sure where to put it. {{done}}
• An advertisement in Melody Maker for a "Whizz Kid Guitarist ... not older than 20 ... not worse looking than Johnny Thunders." ... not a complete sentence {{done}}, fixed both, [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sex_Pistols&diff=1185392434&oldid=1185347781] SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:33, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

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• with his green hair, hunched stance and ragged looked ... like a cross between ... it seems like there is a missing word before looked ?
• : Now it's ragged looked ... looked ??? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:39, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
• I'm missing the point of why this sentence is where it is ? How it relates to rest of para ... On their off-night on the 5th, the Pistols attended a Ramones gig at Dingwalls, like virtually everyone else at the center of the early London punk scene.

{{cot|title= Done, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:56, 16 November 2023 (UTC) }}

• their own Pistols-style group, Buzzcocks. As Devoto later put it, "My life changed the moment that I saw the Sex Pistols."[62] They soon played other important venues, ... "They" meaning the Sex Pistols or Buzzcocks? {{done}} SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:41, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
• Is a para break needed there somewhere to make it clear where the influence on the Buzzcocks ends and other gigs start {{done}}
• OK to reintroduce here what year we are in ??? released their debut album on 23 April. {{done}}

; Sid Vicious replaces Matlock

• John Robb claims it was at the first Sex Pistols residency gig on 11 May 1976; Matlock is convinced it happened in September. .. it ??? the date when Vicious replaced Matlock? How could they be that far apart ? {{done}}
• Who is Cookie? According to Jones, "to Cookie and me, {{done}}
• Incomplete sentence: For a view that Vicious was a more competent bass player than his reputation would have it.[134] {{done}}

; A&M, Virgin, and Jubilee week

• A straggler to be fixed? In Oslo, Lydon was photographed making the Nazi salute while wearing a sweater with a swastika.[unreliable source?] {{done}}
• pseudonymly -- > pseudonymously ??? Seems off .. it's an acronym?? {{done}}

; Break-up

• Not sure if it's a BrEng thing, but here it's usually called the Northeast .. several dates in the north-east. {{done}}

; Post-Lydon

• Wayward to be fixed ... Now[when?] a resident of Los Angeles, {{done}}
• Something is wonky here ... Having played with the band Chiefs of Relief in the late 1980s and with Edwyn Collins in the 1990s,[215] Since the Rich Kids' break-up in 1979, Matlock has played with various bands, including recording and touring with Iggy Pop. {{done}}

; Influence

• A concert with 40 attendants ?? Confused ... not attendees, what is meant by attendants? Many among the audience of the around forty attendants
• : Fixed, I hope: [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sex_Pistols&diff=prev&oldid=1185392906] SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:38, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:58, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

:{{u|Ceoil}} is this ready for me to have a new look yet ? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 12:06, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

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Please set up separate sections for each nomination.

I nominate User:Ceoil for a Featured Article Save Award for their efforts during its FAR to retain the featured status of Sex Pistols. Hog Farm _Talk 02:30, 27 February 2024 (UTC)

1. Support as proposer. Hog Farm _Talk 02:30, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
2. * Link for the lazy to the FAR. Will review soon. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 02:40, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
3. Support! Well deserved. Aza24 (talk) 04:05, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
4. Support agreed Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:20, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
5. Support page is much improved after months of effort and hundreds of edits. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 14:04, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
6. Never mind the Supports, here a belated one! (Sorry about that) ——Serial Number 54129 20:11, 22 July 2024 (UTC)