Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Pokémon/Archive 5
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Archiving
I notices that the page was getting bigger than the prefered size, so I decided to archive it. If there are any comments which were still in use, please revive them from the archive, cheers Minun (talk) 10:53, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
:Started new Future Focus articles. Alvin6226 talk 23:03, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
::Sure, feel free to restore the existing discussion from the archive Minun (マイナン) 10:32, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
:::Its been restored, feel free to continue the discussion Minun (マイナン) 10:33, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
::::Revived roll call. Alvin6226 talk 20:33, 14 July 2006 (UTC)
Future Focus Articles
= Next Pokémon Creature Article =
:Hm, it is the weakest out of the Torchic line, but I'll probably clean up Combusken first. Highway Rainbow Sneakers 06:55, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
- Houndoom is utterly riddled with POV. It does have a nice line of Dobermann lighting effects though ; ) Highway Rainbow Sneakers 13:06, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
- !!! I was adding the tcg scans to each Pokémon when I came across Venonat. It looks horrible! Alvin6226 16:39, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
:All the information is there, it's mostly formatting. I may pick one of these after I'm done with Combusken (haha it took a day, we just can't nominate for FA.. ever) so I'll move on. Highway Rainbow Sneakers 16:51, 28 May 2006 (UTC)
::It's not horrid anymore, right? Erik the Appreciator 19:38, 16 June 2006 (UTC)
MakuhitaThis has been redone by myself and others. Erik the Appreciator 19:38, 16 June 2006 (UTC)
- Shuppet Highway Rainbow Sneakers 08:01, 29 May 2006 (UTC)
:This I have revised as well. Erik the Appreciator 19:38, 16 June 2006 (UTC)
- Something inside me really wants to see Plusle become a good article. Perhaps it's the {{icon|GA}}. (But it would be alanis if Minun became good first.) --Damian Yerrick (☎) 22:51, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:They should both be good articles, it would be strange if one was good and the other wasn't. Minun (talk) 17:18, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Mew (Pokémon)--The Raven's Apprentice (Call) 15:36, 12 June 2006 (UTC)
:Sure, just point out any problems with this article and I'll help you fix them. Minun (talk) 15:41, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Treecko-Compared to Mudkip and Torchic, It's fellow Hoenn starters it is horrible!--Ac1983fan (talk • contribs) 00:10, 22 June 2006 (UTC)
:Someone write an anime section and it'll be a GA within a week, we just lift the text from Torchic and Mudkip and changes a word here and there. ;) Highway Rainbow Sneakers 15:45, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
:: Okay, the anime needs cleaning and the manga needs written, but it's good people. Highway Rainbow Sneakers 19:50, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
::: the anime section has already been written, do you think its good enough for GA yet, if not, please suggest improvements. Minun (talk) 15:12, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
:::: Yes, write one. Ash has one, I think we pull out more than one sentence. And Wally has a Treecko in Pokémon Adventures, write about that. Highway Rainbow Sneakers 15:22, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Rapidash needs a little love. Highway Rainbow Sneakers 15:44, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
:Sure, just point out any problems in this article Minun (talk) 15:25, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
:: Merge "Appearance" with intro, cleanup the videogames, prose TCG, expand anime. If you check Eevee, a Rapidash appears in the same manga chapter, it has the same plot has the Rapidash race. Yeah, Highway Rainbow Sneakers 15:30, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
::: I've managed to do most of it, but there was a few parts I had trobule with. I hope my editing helps. Minun (talk) 15:40, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Linoone: Yikes, what the hell happened here!? Better check it out, folks. Erik the Appreciator 19:47, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
: It's certainly interesting vandalism... Highway Rainbow Sneakers 19:51, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
:: Reverted, it's been sitting like that a week. The IP's been doing it to various articles, but he got reverted. But never warned. He is now the owner of a final warning, since I'm not in the charitable mood. Highway Rainbow Sneakers 19:57, 29 June 2006 (UTC)
- Zigzagoon - has good anime, pokédex and videogames, lacks TCG or manga. Highway Rainbow Sneakers 15:33, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
: I don't know much about the manga, but I would be happy to help with the TCG section. Minun (talk) 15:44, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
- Paras (Pokémon) *faints* Highway Rainbow Sneakers 16:33, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
: Sure, just point out any problems again. Minun (talk) 17:14, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
:: I've noticed that page had a rather small amount of content. I'm improving parts of it, but I need help on the sections focusing on Paras' role in the Pokémon things I'm not into(the anime, manga, and card game) --RandomOrca2 04:07, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
- Cleffa
- Clefable Highway Batman! 20:55, 3 July 2006 (UTC)
- Ivysaur
- Poliwhirl
- Politoed
- Poliwag Highway Batman! 20:58, 3 July 2006 (UTC)
: I agree, I think that should be our next focused article Minun (マイナン) 10:55, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
:: It lacks everything, should be our next focused article Minun (マイナン) 15:50, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
- Hoppip
- Skiploom
- Jumpluff
- Sunflora! Poor Sunflora! This article needs lots of work! I think I can do something about it, though. --Cherimu is beautiful! 19:07, 26 July 2006 (UTC)
- Aipom
- Wooper Highway Batman! 19:05, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
- Charmeleon still marked as a stub —M inun Spiderman 19:17, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
- Quilava
- Croconaw
- Bayleef Highway Batman! 19:20, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
Slowpoke: I'll get to rewriting this overly sectionalized mess sometime... Erik the Appreciator 18:43, 20 July 2006 (UTC)- Seel
- Krabby And these too. Erik the Appreciator 18:52, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
- I'd say Skitty. Holy crap, it doesn't conform at all. XD Toastypk 20:03, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
- Flaaffy could really use some attention. If nobody else is particularly gonzo over it, I may revise and extend it in the next couple of days! --Chuchunezumi 07:57, 22 July 2006 (UTC)
:I went ahead and reformatted the sections to meet the PCP standards. --Chuchunezumi 08:19, 22 July 2006 (UTC)
- Pineco is horrible! Literally horrible! Can we expand on this stub of a stub? TrackerTV (CW|Castform|Green Valley) 02:26, 7 August 2006 (UTC)
::how's that, i did everything i could in reference to the game and anime, i don't much else about the rest of it, i'll see if i can add some media related stuff Zappernapper 17:51, 7 August 2006 (UTC)
= Next Miscellaneous Article =
I reommend choosing Max as the next focus article. Thoughts? The Raven's Apprentice (Call) 11:25, 17 May 2006 (UTC)
Other Mishaps? This article might need some help. Alvin6226 02:30, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
:By the way, that's Max (Pokémon) (obviously). And come to think of it, even Poké Ball and Team Aqua and Team Magma need help. Thoughts?? The Raven's Apprentice (Call) 07:27, 19 May 2006 (UTC)
::Max (Pokémon) needs the borrowed Pokémon section removed, and lots more cleanup, so it would thus be good as a miscellena next article--XenoNeon (converse) 11:23, 21 May 2006 (UTC)
:Make sure the ugly table of Pokémon is replaced with prose! Please! - A Man In Bl♟ck (conspire | past ops) 05:56, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
::The Pokémon character articls are now being taken care of by WP:PAC2, so we should be taking a non-character article. How about Poké Ball or Glitch City?? The Raven's Apprentice (Call) 07:43, 7 June 2006 (UTC)
:I think that Pokemon Ranger should be our next focus.--Ac1983fan (talk • contribs) 23:43, 8 June 2006 (UTC)
::Let's not do a speculative article if we can at all avoid it. Poké Ball needs a lot of love, Max (Pokémon) needs work despite the presence of WP:PAC2. and all of the glitches still need to be collapsed into a single article. - A Man In Bl♟ck (conspire | past ops) 00:19, 9 June 2006 (UTC)
:::WHAT?! If the glitches are merged, we need to transwiki the original articles somewhere else. Okay, so they don't belong in an encyclopedia, but they're very informative for people who want to exploit the glitches. And they're much better than their Bulbapedia counterparts. The Raven's Apprentice (Call) 06:10, 10 June 2006 (UTC)
Even Pokémon trainer needs a lot of work. The Raven's Apprentice (Call) 15:11, 16 June 2006 (UTC) The aforementioned article just needs some heavyhanded deletion. The Raven's Apprentice (Call) 11:43, 25 June 2006 (UTC)
::::Right, lets just all point out all the problems with the article, this way we can find out which is most important, and we can help fix the article. Minun (talk) 17:03, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
:was anyone even aware of this scary thing? i'm not even sure it really deserves it's own page. I'm tempted to speedy delete it unless someone out there thinks they can turn it into something resebling an article. Zappernapper 07:30, 8 August 2006 (UTC)
- Pokémon (anime)-- PRIORITY!!! Man, this sucks. --The Raven's Apprentice (Talk|Contribs) 07:45, 9 August 2006 (UTC)
- Shiny Pokémon. C'mon people! You can do better than this! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 201.17.71.19 (talk • contribs)
[[Charizard]]
According to Charizard's peer review, the article Charizard needs references. It has been suggest we search for a reference on the internet that fits the ifnroamtion thats given, and then use it, cheers Minun (talk) 18:06, 10 July 2006 (UTC)
:It is now on FAC, see the discussion here, cheers Minun (マイナン) 13:59, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
::It appears it needs more copy-editing, any volunteers to copy-edit it Minun (マイナン) 19:52, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
New Pokémon
I have created three new articles, Dorapion, Chierimu and Pachirisu, per [http://serebii.net/diamondpearl/pokemon.shtml this]. New information was all released, noted [http://serebii.net/index2.shtml here]. If editors could make the neccessary updates, that would be great. Highway Batman! 14:46, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
:Im adding the {{tl|Pokerefs}} template Minun (マイナン) 13:45, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
[[Munchlax]]
I think that we should modify this article to make it compatible with WP:PAC/S. Cheers Minun (マイナン) 10:36, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
:It totally lacks references, we need a lot of help to cite the sources, cheers Minun (マイナン) 10:44, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
::I know of a good way to properly format references, you can use the title that appears in the title bar as the title of the reference Minun (マイナン) 10:53, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
[[Lucario]]
POV Rampant
several, several articles are out there with POV like "this pokemon is favored" or "a (any adjective) moveset would be..." and other ridiculous things that should NOT be included in an encyclopeadic (sp) entry on a particular pokemon, that kind of stuff is best left for forums and serebii.net. i think we really need to make a concentrated effort on all the articles to remove POV statements, helping to elevate the project as a whole. is anyone else in favor of this? we could start a new section on the project page listing the NPOV pages and those that still need to be changed (for those uncomfortable with making edits). i'm willing to go ahead an start, but the project is daunting and i'd like to make sure others out there are interested in this too. Zappernapper 20:54, 9 July 2006 (UTC)
:I noticed the statements you made at Talk:Umbreon, and I'll use that article and your arguments as examples. I think there's a flaw in your reasoning. However, I could be wrong; somebody else should correct me if I am. Whichever way, I think it's great that you read about Wikipedia's policies; many new editors don't do that.
:According to the official WP:NPOV policy, the NPOV is "not the absence or elimination of viewpoints". In the example you presented at Umbreon, both a positive and a negative statement about Umbreon's use in battle were presented, which creates balance and presents both viewpoints as objectively as possible. The NPOV policy continues by saying that "Background is provided on who believes what and why, and which view is more popular." Therefore, it is also alright to say how popular Umbreon is among trainers.
:In conclusion, the article is allowed to say whether people think Umbreon is great for battle or not, but it's not allowed to simply say whether the article thinks Umbreon should be used in battle. PCEevee talk 01:48, 10 July 2006 (UTC)
::Just list a couple of articles that you need help with, cheers Minun (talk) 10:25, 10 July 2006 (UTC)
::perhaps more what i'm quibbling over isn't so much whether or not the articles are allowed to discuss popularity of a pokemon among players, but rather the way it's being discussed. To quote from Umbreon itself, "Umbreon is perhaps the most un-used of the Eeveelutions... due to the fact it can't learn any powerful Dark-type moves such as Crunch, players preferring...." a statement like this is pure specualation without any reference given to even an internet poll on a heavily used fan-site, adding "perhaps" is just weasely. Opinion and speculation are not suitable in an encyclopedia. maybe removing that specific statement entirely (unless it can be backed by some factual data) and then reworking the sentence that later comes up discussing Umbreon's strengths to include its weaknesses as well. Like -
:::Umbreon's movepool works in tandem with his above average defenses, including moves like confuse ray, mean look, snatch, and moonlight. This of course means that he doesn't learn very many strong attacks, namely crunch, because of his low special and physical attack stats. Other alternatives for more "aggressive" movesets would be Houndoom or Tyranitar.
::It's kinda wordy and not the best written but i think you get my point. Also we need to remember that not everyone is always up on the lingo, so using jargon like "tank" and "annoyer" should be avoided unless it's briefly explained. Or better yet, linked to a page detailing what this terminology means.
::Zappernapper 02:13, 11 July 2006 (UTC)
:::I've managed to merge the Trivia sections to characteristics per a set of tips, it may still need some changes, please consider reviewing the article, cheers M inun (マイナン) 10:49, 14 July 2006 (UTC)
Well, anything that is written needs to be cited, and by a verifable source. The qeustion now is - is it too crufty? Does the average user care if Umbreon is a great tank, or if "McIceGar" or "SkarmBliss" are commonly-used combos? Hell, I play the games, but would never have known what they were unless I was using NetBattle or played competitively. So even casual Pokémon players may not quite know what's being said in the articles. And if they don't know, the average reader certainly wouldn't know, and thus I agree with the topic creator that they should go, but only because it's too crufty. Hbdragon88 05:05, 18 July 2006 (UTC)
:Thank you... I think we need to make a concerted effort to remove references to battle strategies. While it may be appropriate to say Umbreon has high defenses, it's 'not' to go on about how one might exploit those strengths. There is no published work out there detailing the strategies of Pokemon, so until there is (therefore citable), it's fan based stuff better left for serebii and bulbapedia. Removing these things might leave many articles looking skeletal but then hopefully it will encourage more people to add quality information. (Perhaps anime and pokedex references to Umbreon's moonlight which technically would be its sig move.)
July roll call
The list of members on the front page is getting REALLY long, so let's weed it a little. It's time for a roll call. If you're still interested in working on this project's articles (even if you're not doing so right now; I'm just removing people who aren't active on WP or aren't interested any more), please sign below.
# ~~~~
This roll call is closed. If you'd like to join the project (or you're still active and your name was removed), just re-add your name to the main project page. - A Man In Bl♟ck (conspire | past ops) 02:50, 4 August 2006 (UTC)
Possible Article Style Error
It has recently been brought to my attention that it is one of the article style guidelines to put "the" before the name of the Pokemon in the beginning, as if the Pokemon were a species. However, after reading another user's comment concerning the subject, I noticed that the aforementioned use of "the" does not persist in the rest of the article. This inconsistency is a blatant grammar error, as it violates the grammatical status of the word. In the Anime, Bulbasaur, for example, is always referred to as just Bulbasaur as if it were his first name, making the word a proper noun, as opposed to a regular noun, and one of the basic grammar rules is that a proper noun is never preceded by "the". The names of the Pokemon are not nouns but proper nouns, names, and therefore should not be preceded by "the". I say Remove the "the"s. What do you think? --Lividore 17:54, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
:It does. An anon who has no clue about pluralization doesn't know enough about it. Highway Batman! 18:00, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
::Are you saying that it's ok to write an article about a species of creatures and then refer to the name of the creature in the article as if it were its first name? You don't refer to "Michael" as "the Michael" and you don't refer to "the cow" as just "cow" either. You've got to pick a way and stick with it. Either it's a proper or a regular noun. --Lividore 18:05, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
:::No it's both. It's been well discussed, but a Pokémon article is split in two parts. The first part (intro to the bottom of video games) discusse the species, ie - all of the members of the species, anime and manga are discussing individual members of the species, they're name just happens to be the name of species. Like a sheep called sheep. Trading Card Game is general relation since they're bits of paper, but that's mainly as a species, unless it's "Someone's Pokémon", which is an individual. Cheers, Highway Batman! 18:14, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
::::I agree with everyone else, i've never heard "THE" before any Pokémon, its never in the video games or the anime, so explain where you've heard "THE" before the name, cheers M inun (Spiderman) 10:28, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
::::: Exerpt from Labrador Retriever: "The Labrador Retriever ("Labrador" or "Lab" for short), is one of several kinds of retriever..." and further on. The article clearly defines the Labrador as a species from that, and further on, it actually is logical to no longer say "the" and everything. Also, as HighwayCello claims, there is a specific claim to the name of the Pokémon and a difference with the species of one. Often, it can be shortened reference. --Tetsuya-san (talk : contribs) 12:30, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
:::::: I think we reached a conclusion at the discussion on the style page itself... We're being plural from here on out. Erik the Appreciator 18:37, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
Listing a template for deletion
I've listed Template:Orange Islands for deletion. It doesn't seem to serve any sort of use any more now that several of the characters' pages have been merged. Perhaps a simple list of characters at the main Orange Islands article is necessary. Ryulong 04:26, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
A few suggestions for {{tl|Poke-stub}}
I have a few suggestions on how to improve Template:Poke-stub. We can replace :Image:Wikiball.png with :Image:Pokeball.png (Its not fair use per its uploader) and remove the arrow from the "Expanding it" link. Using the following code:
any thoughts? —M inun (Spiderman) 11:05, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
: No no no! As part of s standard, uniform appearance on Wikipedia, it is best to keep the Pokémon stub templates as all Wikipedia articles have their stub templates shown, especially following the Wikipedia:Stub guideline designs! --Tetsuya-san (talk : contribs) 12:25, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
:: Thats alright, but how about we removed the arrow from the "Expanding it" links? M inun (Spiderman) 15:00, 16 July 2006 (UTC)
[[Pikachu]]
I am aiming on getting Pikachu onto its third FAC, please make suggestions on the peer review page. All other pending tasks have been complete, so if theres anything wrong, please add more tasks at Talk:Pikachu/to do. Cheers —M inun (Spiderman) 15:31, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
[[P:P/FAA|Portal:Pokémon Selected article]]
The Nintendo Project has a userbox
So why shouldn't we?
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It's only the basics, but it can be improved upon, including a category. Ryūlóng 05:47, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
:We have one -
{{tl|User WikiProject_PCP}} Highway Return to Oz... 11:11, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
::I laughed so hard... Alvin6226 talk 18:32, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
:::Never saw that anywhere. Ryūlóng 20:40, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
::::I've added the category —Minun Spiderman • Review Me 11:19, 11 August 2006 (UTC)