Talk:Dominick Pezzulo

The section on "Death" reads like a story. This isn't appropriate to an encyclopedia at all. -Etoile (talk) 17:17, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

I concur, its probably a copy paste from a news article (DrakeLuvenstein (talk) 11:07, 8 December 2008 (UTC))

• I'm doing some cleaning up in the 'Death' section in order to make it sounds less story-like. Also, could someone with more knowledge of 9/11 please check over the section to look for points that need citation tags? 198.166.32.75 (talk) 19:30, 24 July 2010 (UTC)

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