wikipedia talk:today's featured article/January 7, 2023

i have taken the liberty of replacing the blurb submitted at tfa/r with a version of the draft written by Gog and reviewed by fac nominator Borsoka, because the former was too short for a tfa blurb, and i felt that it read more like a curriculum vitae than most tfa blurbs, while Gog's blurb read more like a summary of the life of the featured subject. if the previous blurb is to be preferred, i would not mind being reverted.{{pb}}courtesy pinging {{u|Vida0007}} (tfa/r nominator), {{u|Gog the Mild|Gog}} (blurb drafter), {{u|Borsoka}} (fac nominator), and {{u|Jimfbleak}} (tfa coordinator for this month). dying (talk) 00:22, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

:dying fine with me Jimfbleak - talk to me? 09:18, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

:@{{u|Dying}}: I second Jim's motion. Vida0007 (talk) 12:47, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

I think "Achaea" should be linked to the Principality of Achaea (instead of Achaea) in the seventh sentence (just like Jerusalem which is linked to the Kingdom of Jerusalem). Borsoka (talk) 11:59, 6 January 2023 (UTC)

: oh, good point. i will bring it up at wp:errors, as i am not sure if anyone else is paying attention to this page, and the blurb has already been protected via cascading protection. dying (talk) 22:56, 6 January 2023 (UTC)