Talk:14th Street Tunnel shutdown/GA1

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 14:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use {{Done}}, {{Fixed}}, {{Added}}, {{Not Done}}, {{Doing}}, or {{Removed}}, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. —♠Vami_IV†♠ 14:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

:{{ping|Epicgenius}} Hi again. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 14:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

::{{re|Vami IV}} Thanks for the quick review. I have resolved these issues. epicgenius (talk) 16:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

• Combine the parts of "Background" that deal with the damage caused by Hurricane Sandy into Paragraph 1, and those that deal with the immediate aftermath into Paragraph 2. {{tq|In October 2012, Hurricane Sandy caused severe damage to New York City,}} Should ideally launch into {{tq|The storm flooded nine of the system's 14 underwater tunnels [...] and completely destroyed a portion of the IND Rockaway Line (A train) in Queens, [...].}}
• {{Done}}
• Elaborate on this years of needed repairs.
• {{Done}} The repairs were staggered over several years.

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• {{tq|between Bedford Avenue in Brooklyn and Eighth Avenue in Manhattan}} Specify that "Bedford Avenue" and "Eighth Avenue" here are stations and not the streets.
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• The L train needs a wikilink.
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• {{tq|and running the M to [...] G, J/Z and M [...] of the G would [...] The M's peak [...] except for the A and R would [...] The J/Z and M would [...] The G would also [...] the G would not [...] suspended L service}} Expand with the word "train"/"trains".
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• {{tq|and East Village, Manhattan,}} Consider "the East Village".
• {{Done}}
• {{tq|Lorimer Street (J and ​M trains),}} Redundant link to the M train here.
• {{Done|Rearranged}}
• The SBS, NYCDOT, NYCEDC acronyms are not explained.
• {{Done}}
• {{tq|speeded up transit times}} sped up
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• {{tq|transit times for transit riders}} Delete one of these "transits".
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• {{tq|January 6, 2019, three months before the tunnel is set to shut down}} This should not be present-tense.
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• {{tq|Free transfers will be available}} If this is supposed to be present-tense, use "are". If not, "would".
• {{Done}} this was in the past tense. epicgenius (talk) 16:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
• {{tq|ferry and two Select Bus Service routes [...] the L5 will not be a Select Bus Service route}} Redundant links for SBS.
• {{Done}} Also, I trimmed this a bit since the route was not implemented.
• {{tq|analysis of possible effect}} the possible effect
• {{Done}}
• What's a benchwall?
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• {{Tq|The busway would have the same vehicle restrictions as originally planned: the only vehicles that could use the busway would be buses, trucks making deliveries on 14th Street, emergency and Access-A-Ride vehicles, and local traffic traveling for no more than one block.}} Nothing after the colon here is required.
• {{Done}}
• {{tq|However, the busway was not implemented as scheduled in July 2019.[94][95] The implementation of the busway was pushed back to August,[96][97] before finally taking effect on October 3, 2019.[98][99]}} Condense.
• {{Done}}

Images are relevant and free, though few in number. Article passes copyvio scanning with 23% likelihood. –♠Vami_IV†♠ 14:00, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

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