Talk:1864 Washington Arsenal explosion/GA2

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Nominator: {{User|APK}} 09:48, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: BigChrisKenney (talk · contribs) 00:44, 23 October 2024 (UTC)

Hello! I am going to review this article as part of the October 2024 GA Drive. I look forward to working with you. Let's get this article to GA status!

:Thanks for taking the time to review and copyedit! APK hi :-) (talk) 03:31, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

===Intro===

My biggest concern for the intro is how long it is. Consider shortening.

:{{done}} APK hi :-) (talk) 03:31, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Good.

"Bricks and other debris flew into all directions."

• This sentence is not in the source. Cite or remove.

"...including send who were blinded."

• This word doesn't make sense here.

:{{done}} APK hi :-) (talk) 03:31, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Good.

Good.

Good.

Why is the Allegheny Arsenal explosion listed here?

• I thought it was related since they were both explosions at arsenals during the Civil War. I can remove if you disagree. APK hi :-) (talk) 03:31, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

I find them all acceptable and relevant.

I have made edits throughout the article that you may choose to review.

:Final Assessment

:#It is reasonably well written.

:#:a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|pass}}
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|pass}}

:#It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

:#:a (references): {{GAList/check|pass}}
b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|pass}}
c (OR): {{GAList/check|pass}}
d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|pass}}

:#It is broad in its coverage.

:#:a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|pass}}
b (focused): {{GAList/check|pass}}

:#It follows the neutral point of view policy.

:#:Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|pass}}

:#It is stable.

:#:No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|pass}}

:#It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

:#:a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|pass}}
b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|pass}}

:Overall:
Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|pass}}

BigChrisKenney (talk) 06:45, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

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