Talk:2009 Emirates Cup/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:01, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Taking on the review of this article. MWright96 (talk) 19:01, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.
2. :a (prose): {{GAList/check|y}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
3. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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6. It is broad in its coverage.
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9. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
10. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
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12. It is stable.
13. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
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15. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
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• "and he nearly made goalkeeper Grégory Coupet pay" - might want to reword the last part of this piece of text slightly so it is more formal.
• Wikilink Atlético Madrid the first time it's mentioned
• "and ex-Arsenal player" - {{xt|former}}
• "when substitute Andrey Arshavin volleyed in from a cross" - Mention the player that executed the cross that allowed Arshavin to score
• "Germán Pacheco equalised for Atlético from a counter" - I didn't understand what is meant by counter. That will need clarifying.
• "defensive mistake" - this should be spelt as {{xt|a defensive error}}

That is all from me. All references are in order. Going to put this review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:10, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

:{{ping|MWright96}} thanks for taking a look at this, got all corrections I believe. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:09, 26 December 2017 (UTC)

::{{ping|Lemonade51} Good work. Now promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 19:01, 26 December 2017 (UTC)