Talk:Aimé Mpane/GA1

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Nominator: {{User|APK}} 02:02, 24 January 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

:@APK Here are my comments. Hope they can be addressed. :) Arconning (talk) 16:19, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

::{{ping|Arconning}} Thanks for the review! APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 15:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

• {{!xt|did not go far enough.}}, go far enough? Could probably reword this^^
• {{!xt|A second sculpture was added and,}}, add another comma after {{xt|added}}.
• {{!xt|restore, not repair, }}, add quotes.

::{{done}} APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

• {{!xt|Aimé Mpane was born in 1968 in the modern-day}}, remove {{!xt|the}}.
• {{!xt|after the Congo Crisis had ended,}}, remove comma.
• {{!xt| cabinet-maker and sculptor}}, replace {{!xt|cabinet-maker}} with {{xt|cabinetmaker}} or {{xt|cabinet maker}}. Also add a comma at the end.
• {{!xt|taught the Congolese}}, {{xt|taught that the Congolese}}.
• {{!xt|Institut Des Beaux Arts}}, {{xt|Institut des Beaux-Arts}} and add a comma at the end.
• {{!xt|In 1994, Mpane moved to Belgium }}, add a comma at the end.
• {{!xt|his first award, }}, remove comma.
• {{!xt|portrayed as a savage people}}, remove {{!xt|a}}.

::{{done}} APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

• {{!xt|Congo Free State, and the way racism has played a large role in it.}}, remove comma and replace {{!xt|it}} with {{xt|them}}.

::{{done}} APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

• Wikilink first mention of Kinshasa.
• {{!xt| and was featured}}, {{xt| and were featured}}.

::{{done}} APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

• {{!xt|in the Kinshasa}}, remove {{!xt|the}}.
• {{!xt|Nike swoosh}}, replace with {{xt|Nike Swoosh}} and just wikilink the entirety to the Swoosh.
• {{!xt|1897 Brussels International Exposition}}, add a comma at the end.
• {{!xt|he thought Congolese should be involved in the process.}}, {{xt|he thought Congolese people should be involved in the process.}}.
• {{!xt|not looking towards the past, but the Congolese looking up, towards a brighter future. }}, {{!xt|for everyone to reconcile the past instead of fighting over it.}}, {{!xt|restoration rather than a repair}}, add quotes.

::{{done}} APK hi :-) (talk) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

• No issues from me.

• Images have proper licenses, art works have fair use licenses which makes sense.

• Random refs check: 7, 16, 23. Yep good.
• Earwig picks up "violation unlikely"!
• Manual check seems great.

• No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information about the topic.

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