Talk:Bradford Shellhammer/GA1

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Reviewer: No Great Shaker (talk · contribs) 13:44, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

1. Well written: the prose is clear and concise. {{GAList/check|y}}
2. Well written: the spelling and grammar are correct. {{GAList/check|y}}
3. Complies with the MOS guidelines for lead sections. {{GAList/check|y}}
4. Complies with the MOS guidelines for article structure and layout. {{GAList/check|y}}
5. Complies with the MOS guidelines for words to watch. {{GAList/check|y}}
6. Complies with the MOS guidelines for writing about fiction – not applicable.
7. Complies with the MOS guidelines for list incorporation – not applicable.
8. Complies with the MOS guidelines for use of quotations – not applicable.
9. All statements are verifiable with inline citations provided. {{GAList/check|y}}
10. All inline citations are from reliable sources, etc. {{GAList/check|y}}
11. Contains a list of all references in accordance with the layout style guideline. {{GAList/check|y}}
12. No original research. {{GAList/check|y}}
13. No copyright violations or plagiarism. {{GAList/check|y}}
14. Broad in its coverage but within scope and in summary style. {{GAList/check|n}}
15. Neutral. {{GAList/check|y}}
16. Stable. {{GAList/check|y}}
17. Illustrated, if possible. {{GAList/check|y}}
18. Images are at least fair use and do not breach copyright. {{GAList/check|y}}

For reviews, I use the above list of criteria as a benchmark and complete the variables as I go along. Hope to provide some feedback soon. No Great Shaker (talk) 13:44, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

This is fine as far as it goes but, on balance, I have to say that it fails GACR #3 because there simply isn't any appreciable breadth of coverage. The whole thing is an introduction only and, as such, could form an entire lead section. I think the nomination has been done too soon as significant expansion is needed. No Great Shaker (talk) 14:14, 19 April 2020 (UTC)