Talk:Cable Car Cinema/GA1

GA Review

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| result = Passed. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 23:03, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

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Nominator: {{User|Rhododendrites}} 01:54, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d (talk · contribs) Hi, I had this article on my list for a bit and I finally have time to review it!10:29, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

:Sorry I’m on mobile so the formatting in the table looks a bit awkward. Let me know if I should clarify something! Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 11:38, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

{{GATable|4=K|5=K|7=K|1a=Hold|1acom=Lead:

•single screen -> single-screen

•I would say maybe expand the lead by another 2-4 sentences. Try to summarize the entirety of the article. I think the Interview should be mentioned in the lead

Description and programming:

•This heading seems pretty clunky. Why not just “description”

•Teddy Bear's Picnic —> Teddy Bears’ Picnic

•link total revenue

History:

•link cable car

•though -> Although

•the historic preservation commission. Which one?

•its area -> that area

•some time doors —> some time the doors

•link 35mm film

•link digital projection system

•Though it was profitable —>Although it was profitable

•link multiplexes

Reception:

•link Entertainment Weekly

•link Marquee

•Marquee Theater". —> I think the period goes inside the quotes|1b=K|2a=K|2b=K|2c=K|2d=K|6b=K|6a=K|3b=K|3a=K|4com=|2acom=Spot check:

•“According to the owners, ticket sales only accounted for about 35-40% of total revenue” {{check mark}}

•“in 1976 was a failure, with no customers buying tickets, and the business took several years to find an audience” {{check mark}}

•“The space underwent renovations in 2010”

•“The cinema attracted some attention for being one of the first to show the controversial film, The Interview, after North Korean hackers attacked Sony Pictures Entertainment and threatened theaters considering a screening” {{check mark}}}}

{{ping|Dr.Swag Lord, Ph.d}} Thanks for the review! I'm not sure if you're done yet, but I went ahead and fixed the things you flagged above [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cable_Car_Cinema&diff=prev&oldid=1236441108 here]. A couple exceptions: "marquee" is only used as a proper noun, and that award is linked via the issuing publication, and I think MOS:LOGICAL calls for periods outside of quotes except when including sentence punctuation from the source as part of a quote. Otherwise, I think I got everything. — Rhododendrites ^talk \\ 18:41, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

:oops! Didn't expand the lead. Will get to that shortly. — Rhododendrites ^talk \\ 20:29, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

:ok {{done}} now — Rhododendrites ^talk \\ 21:17, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

::@Rhododendrites, good work on this. No further complaints from me. Passing {{check mark}}. Dr. Swag Lord (talk) 23:02, 24 July 2024 (UTC)