Talk:Crash Tag Team Racing/GA1
GA review
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Nominator: {{User|Cat's Tuxedo}} 14:24, 30 May 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 23:28, 21 June 2025 (UTC)
Will make a start soon. Jaguar (talk) 23:28, 21 June 2025 (UTC)
;Lead
- I view the lead a little on the short side. There should be a token mention of development, and the reception part should be towards the end of the second paragraph rather than the beginning
;Body
- "In the game's single-player campaign, the player controls Crash on foot in a theme park hub," - link hub world
- "To recover them, Von Clutch announces a no-holds-barred race" - I'm unfamiliar with this term, perhaps {{xt|no restrictions race}} is better?
- "Crash Tag Team Racing was in development by Radical Entertainment at the time" - sounds like it was in development by them, then handed over to someone else. Try {{xt|was developed}}
While I wish my reviews could be longer of late, there is no need. Although I find the lead rather short, it still summarises the article, given its lack of development coverage. I would recommend a mention of it regardless, and rearranging the second paragraph somewhat. In any case, it's comprehensive and well written, so it meets the GA criteria as it is. {{icon|GA}} Jaguar (talk) 21:58, 22 June 2025 (UTC)