Talk:Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2003/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 17:02, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
Happy to review this article.
=Review=
====Lead section/infobox====
- Unlink Latvia (as Riga is linked next to it)
- himself is redundant
{{done}} Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
====1 Background====
- Link Yiannis Dimitrou ('Γιάννης Δημητράς' In the Greek Wikipedia, using
{{ill|Yiannis Dimitrou|el|Γιάννης Δημητράς}}
{{done}} Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
====2.1 Internal selection====
- Link Riga; lyricist
{{done}} Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
====2.2 Promotion====
- Link V2 Records; Greek (Greek language)
- Spain's Eurovision preparations – typo?
- Link CD single in the caption
{{done}} - I removed the 's' from preparations. It can be plural too and make sense, but I don't mind it being singular either. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
====3 At Eurovision====
- Omit Latvia in Riga, Latvia (not needed, as it is already stated in the article)
- Link backing vocalist
- Amend was slightly injured during the first rehearsal, though they were able to to ‘who was slightly injured during the first rehearsal, was able to’, to improve the prose
- following the entry from Croatia and preceding the entry from Germany seems over detailed, happy if you want to keep it in for consistency
- in position nine – 'ninth' sounds better imo
- Unlink postcard - it leads to a single sentence in another article. I would include the information there in a note in this article, or within the text of this section.
- Unlink football (common term)
{{done}} I did tweak the injury sentence a bit more than you suggested. I liked having football linked because European football is definitely not the common term for me. I removed the link regardless though. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
====3.1 Voting====
- had placed 20th – 'had been placed 20th'
{{done}} Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
====4 References====
- Ref 2 – a source for the 2007 edition of O’Connor is available [https://archive.org/details/eurovisionsongco0000ocon/page/112/mode/2up?q= here] (p.113), it might be useful to you and/or other readers if this source was used instead of the one stated
- Ref 17 – it might be useful if the Greek title was translated (minor point)
- Ref 18 (Eurovision Song Contest 2003. Riga, Latvia. 24 May 2003.) - cannot be verified
{{done}} Removed ref 18 as it was only supplemental. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
====5 Further reading====
- The title of this section should be Sources (or something similar). As O’Connor is cited, Further reading is incorrect
{{done}} Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
===On hold===
Nice work. I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 12 January to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 10:05, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
:{{ping|Amitchell125}} Thanks for the review! I believe I've addressed most of your concerns. My individual comments are above. Grk1011 (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2022 (UTC)
Passing
Great stuff, passing the article now. Amitchell125 (talk) 16:57, 5 January 2022 (UTC)