Talk:David Fletcher (baseball)/GA1

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| result = Passed. Riley1012 (talk) 12:32, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 11:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)

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Hello {{u|Sewageboy}}! I'll complete a review within a week. -Riley1012 (talk) 11:34, 11 April 2023 (UTC)

:* Hi {{u|Sewageboy}}. I apologize for the delay. I'm about to have final exams and underestimated how much work I still have left. I will do to review this weekend. Thanks! -Riley1012 (talk) 16:26, 19 April 2023 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose ({{GAList/check| y}}) 1b. MoS ({{GAList/check| y}}) 2a. ref layout ({{GAList/check| y}}) 2b. cites WP:RS ({{GAList/check| y}}) 2c. no WP:OR ({{GAList/check| y}}) 2d. no WP:CV ({{GAList/check| y}})

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1. Well-written

• "Fletcher was born in Orange, California and attended..." comma is needed after a state's name when the sentence continues
• Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
• "...and was awarded as the WCC Defensive Player of the Year." This wording is awkward. Change to "was named the WCC Defensive Player of the Year"
• Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
• "Fletcher began the 2023 season with the Angels, but went just..." comma needs to be taken out after Angels
• Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

2. Well-sourced

• Ref 23 needs more information in its citation (including the website name and access date)
• Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
• Ref 47 is a bare URL
• Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
• Refs 6, 11, 24, 34, 36, and 39 all need access dates
• Fixed Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

[https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=David+Fletcher+%28baseball%29&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 Copyvio check] good. Spot check of refs 2, 9, 21, 27, 35, 50, and 55 looks good.

Other

• "Fletcher has received endorsement deals from Budweiser, Bank of America, and New Balance." This should either be expanded and made into a new section (public image or something like that) or moved into the player profile section. Endorsement deals aren't a part of someone's personal life.
• Moved to player profile section. Sewageboy (talk) 05:23, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

Article is neutral, stable, and all images are free and relevant.

Only a few changes needed to be made, well done! -Riley1012 (talk) 13:59, 22 April 2023 (UTC)

:Hi @Riley1012, I've made the requested changes. Let me know if any issues remain. Sewageboy (talk) 05:24, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

::Thanks, looks good. -Riley1012 (talk) 12:31, 23 April 2023 (UTC)

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