Talk:Deli Mike/GA1

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:33, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

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#It is reasonably well written. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check

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b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}

It is factually accurate and verifiable.

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d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}

It is broad in its coverage.

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It follows the neutral point of view policy.

:Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}

It is stable.

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It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

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Just some copy fixes and alt text and you're good to go. Didn't expect a GA on an individual plane, but here we are! 7-day hold for {{u|Styyx}}. Ping me when done. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:52, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

• {{!xt|In late 1980s}} {{right arrow}} "In the late 1980s"
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• "phased-out" should not be hyphenated
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• Change contraction "would've" to "would have"
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• {{!xt|option for further five}} {{right arrow}} "option for a further five"
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• {{!xt|Frequent problems with the aircraft include the reading light of a completely different passenger turning on when the button is pressed and the same issue also exists with the button used to call a crew member}} Add comma after "pressed". More: User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences
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• {{!xt|re-configured}} and {{!xt|lay-out}} remove dashes
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• {{tq|There were initial speculations}} — "There was initial speculation"; this is not plural in English
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• "sistership" is not one word in English, but the claim from [5] does check out that three other A340s from the order were used as restaurants and venues. I'd say "as had previously happened to three sister aircraft".
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• {{tq|The technicians also removed and re-installed all systems, and reset}} — another commas in sentences info, drop this comma. also, "reinstalled", no hyphen
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• {{!xt|when many others are grounded}} — maybe "were" grounded? there's definitely a tense issue here
• :{{done}}; also replaced "when" with "while".
• {{!xt|Bora Erdin of pro-opposition newspaper Sözcü also added that the airline made "no clarification as to why the problematic plane [Deli Mike] was used persistently while unproblematic ones were on the ground", and pointed out to the frequent issue of the landing gear not retracting after take-off, causing the aircraft to return to the origin airport.}} Several items:

:* Remove comma after the quote (another commas in sentences issue)

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:* "and pointed out to" might be better parsed as "and highlighted"

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:* Takeoff is one word

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I do not speak or read Turkish, so sources are being run through Google Translate to check. The four I chose do check out.

• [5] Use of sister aircraft as restaurants: Checks out to source.
• [7] Checks out for fleet overhaul/temporary grounding of some aircraft after a fall in demand
• [10] Removal of livery
• [11] Ferrying to Johannesburg

• References are archived.
• Earwig has no issues whatsoever, owing to the exclusively non-English sourcing.
• Images outside of the infobox need alt text. They all have permission or are otherwise freely licensed.
• :{{Added}} alt texts, only couldn't find anything the first one so it's now |alt=refer to caption.

• {{U|Sammi Brie}} addressed the issues. ~Styyx^Talk? 11:19, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

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