Talk:El Dandy/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 09:09, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

Will review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 09:09, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.
2. :a (prose): {{GAList/check|y}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
3. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
4. :a (reference section): {{GAList/check|y}} b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}} c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
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6. It is broad in its coverage.
7. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}} b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
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9. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
10. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
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12. It is stable.
13. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
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15. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
16. :a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}} b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
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18. Overall:
19. :Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}
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• "Gutiérrez has wrestled as recent as March 2019." - {{xt|most recently in March 2019.}}
• "He was a part of a tag team that was known as" - the text in bold is not needed
• "A 2004 match against L.A. Park was voted Box y Lucha magazines "Match of the year"." - {{xt|was voted "Match of the Year" by readers of Box y Lucha magazine.}}

• "After five years of training he finally, reluctantly," - {{xt|finally but reluctantly,}}
• "A local promoter asked Gutiérrez if he would prefer to wrestle unmasked instead, leading to Gutiérrez to lose the mask and wrestle unmasked for the remainder of his career." - repetition of "unmasked"

• "and also taking him under their wings." - informal; use another formal phrase
• "to earn enough money to eat." - {{xt|for food.}}
• "His reign lasted 175 days, ended when Pequeño Solin defeated him on January 22, 1983." - {{xt|His 175-day reign ended when}}
• "El Dandy won his first lucha de apuestas ("bet match") against El Guerrero and as a result of the match," - repetition of "match"
• "Seventy-seven days later," - {{xt|A total of 77 days later,}}
• "and in the process gave up the lower ranking Mexican National title." - {{xt|relinquished}}
• "a weight class with a 78 kg (172 lb) max limit" - {{xt|a weight class with a maximum limit of {{convert|78|kg|lb}}}}
• "El Dandy moved up to the middleweight division " - {{xt|progressed}}
• "El Dandy became involved in a storyline with another middleweight competitor, El Satánico. El Satánico cost El Dandy the championship" - try not to start the beginning of the following sentence like this
• "as part of the build to a Lucha de Apuestas match between the two." - {{xt|build up}}
• "Weeks later El Satánico defeated El Dandy," - how many weeks exactly?
• " to even the score of two-all" - {{xt|at}}
• "El Dandy defeated Negro Casas to win the recently created CMLL World Middleweight Championship." - {{xt|claim}}
• "and then Chicaco Express" - {{xt|Chicago}} per CageMatch source

• "While working for CMLL El Dandy also worked for the World Wrestling Association (WWA) in Tijuana, Baja California," - repetition of "working(ed)"
• "El Dandy returned to WWA in 2001," - am certain the year that El Dany returned to WWA is incorrect as the next sentence says 2001
• "He won the WWA World Tag Team Championship for a third time, teaming with Rey Misterio to win the vacant title on August 27, 2007." - repetition of "win"
• "The team later vacated the championship for reasons that have not been made public." - {{xt|for undisclosed reasons.}}

• Wikilink pay-per-view
• "In early 2000, El Dandy and Silver King became a regular tag team, dubbed Los Fabulosos: "the hottest men in Latin America", playing off the fact that they were not "traditionally handsome". The two were teamed up with manager Stacy Kiebler." - these two sentences need to be verified by a reliable source

• Wikilink steel cage to the relevant article
• "In Aril 2009," - typo; should be written as {{xt|April}}
• "El Dandy lost a match for the NWA Worlds Heavyweight Championship" - typo; should be spelt as {{xt|World}}
• "EL Dandy won the match, which meant that El Satánico was shaved bald." - {{xt|El}}
• "with four matches in 2016, one in 2017, and one in 2019." - {{xt|and one in both 2017 and 2019.}}

• "He later challenged Scorpio Jr. for the IWRG Intercontinental Heavyweight Championship but lost the match." - include the date when El Dandy challenged Scorpio Jr. for the IWRG Intercontinental Heavyweight Championship

• "He was soon written into a storyline rivalry with Perro Aguayo Jr. as the two clashed against each other on multiple occasions." - needs to be verified by a reliable source mentioning all this information
• "faced off in a four way Lucha de Apuestas match." - {{xt|four-way}}

• "At one point, Gutiérrez he suffered a serious back injury that left him unable to perform for a while." - {{xt|At one point of Gutiérrez's life, he sustained}}
• "especially as few of his fellow wrestlers kept in contact with him during his hard times." - {{xt|during this period.}}
• "He turned to therapy to help, and he became a therapist." - clarify that he became a physical therapist

• "and that he had "Phenomenal matches"" - the word in bold does not need to begin with a capital letter
• "by the readers of Box y Lucha magazine." - {{xt|by readers}}

• Note H is missing the period to end the sentence

• ===References===
• The hyphen in the title of Reference 28 should be replaced by an en dash (–) per MOS:DASH
• The hyphen in Reference 41's title must be replaced by an en dash for MOS:DASH compliance
• Reference 44 is missing the date it was published
• Reference 66 should mention that it is in Spanish
• The hyphen featured in Reference 67's title should be replaced by an en dash (–) to comply with MOS:DASH

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:59, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

• All there is left is the sourcing that I will work on over the weekened.MPJ-DK (talk) 03:16, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
• {{reply|MPJ-DK}} Any update on the fixing of the sourcing issues? MWright96 (talk) 13:35, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
• {{u|MWright96}} I am stuck on the sources. I'll give it one last shot, if not, rewrite those pieces. MPJ-DK (talk) 02:58, 29 October 2020 (UTC)
• {{ping|MPJ-DK}} Any updates? MWright96 (talk) 15:47, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
• {{u|MWright96}} rewritten to be covered by sources. MPJ-DK (talk) 02:41, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
• {{reply|MPJ-DK}} Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 16 November 2020 (UTC)