Talk:Ferré-class submarine/GA1
GA review
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Nominator: {{User|Tylermack999}} 12:44, 26 March 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:57, 19 May 2025 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:57, 19 May 2025 (UTC)
- There's a lot going on here that isn't relevant to the submarines themselves. Pretty much everything before the service entry section should be deleted. Here's a link to a submarine class article that's already a GA that can serve as a model for your article, I-351-class submarine. Be sure to update the infobox accordingly.
- Images appropriately licensed
- {{SS|Kanguroo}} was a French ship built by Schneider-Creusot to deliver their submarines world wide.
- I'm surprised to see no references to Avendaño as it would seem to be your best source for the activities of the submarines.
- Navypedia is not a reliable source and cannot be used.
- Let me know when you've reworked the article and I'll take another look at it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:30, 25 May 2025 (UTC)
:{{ping|Tylermack999}} What's the status here?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:44, 22 June 2025 (UTC)
::Apologies, haven't been super active with my editing lately. I think we can pause or cancel the review until I can get around to making these changes. I'm not actually familiar with Avendaño. As for the actual information on the submarines, I'm having difficulty finding additional sources with information beyond what is in the article. Though, this is likely due to my lack of familiarity with good sources on naval history as this was my first experience with researching a vessel for an article. If you have any pointers on where I might be able to find additional information (especially primary sources and records) please let me know. Tylermack999 (talk) 21:56, 22 June 2025 (UTC) Tylermack999 (talk) 21:56, 22 June 2025 (UTC)
:::I'll go ahead and fail this. Latin American ships are hard to research, especially if you're a monoglot like myself. Thankfully Google and yandex translate can translate stuff for you, if imperfectly. Interlibrary loan is a godsend if you have access to it. Conway's is good, but is a general overview at best. In this case I think you're gonna need to borrow or buy a copy of Avendaño as I'm not aware of anything else on such a specialized topic. Another route to explore is to browse the Worldcat listings for the Peruvian Navy.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:18, 22 June 2025 (UTC)