Talk:Forget What You Know/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 12:33, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

• Needs alt

::It already has alt-text though. Yeepsi (talk) 21:38, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

• Recorded: November 2003 → no source

::Per the body: "lasting three weeks in November". Yeepsi (talk) 21:38, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

• Studio: Ruby Red Studios → Ruby Red

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• final studio album → should mention on the body of the article since the band split up
• Critics gave the album a mixed reception and complimented its energy and sound → since it was mixed add a critic
• Midtown went on two US tours → Midtown went on two other US tours (they did one first)

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• Fine

• Hitt said the group "didn't put our next album out there at that moment to make it seem like we had all these things going on". → the tenses are not right, need to be re-written
• started managing the group. → started to manage the group.
• With tracking lasting → what does tracking mean in this context?
• Walker and T mixed the recordings, and with the exception of "Give It Up" they were mastered by George Marino at Sterling Sound in New York City. "Give it Up" → All the recordings, but "Give it Up", were mixed by Walker and Russ T, and mastered by George Marino at Sterling Sound in New York City. "Give It Up" was

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• "Goodbye Sky Harbor" → date of release

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• "Give It Up" was released to radio on May 18 that year and two days later it was released as a single. → wasn't a single when it was sent to radio? They made the song available for download
• Midtown went on a → Midtown went on a co-headline
• All these releases I would suggest you create a release history section
• and a five shows with → and five shows with
• Weren't they on Geffen Records? How did the album ended up being release under Columbia Records? Why didn't Geffen wanted to release it?

::I'm presuming they were dropped by Geffen Records due to lack of activity, but it's not mentioned in any source. Yeepsi (talk) 21:38, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

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• Forget What You Know peaked at number 109 on the Billboard 200. → weeks spent + date
• "The album received mixed reviews from most music critics"
• AllMusic is a mixed review, should be after Exclaim, Melodic and OX-Fanzine and punknews, the rating is just 2,5 stars.

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• Take a look at the Wikipedia:WikiProject_Albums/Album_article_style_advice#Track_listing examples
• You have Butch Walker as a producer.

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• Fine

• Fine

• You need to wikilink most of the sources, but Billboard as that is already done.

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• Fine

• You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:22, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

::Done. Yeepsi (talk) 22:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

{{ping|Yeepsi}} I made minor changes, see if you are ok with them. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:47, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

::Changes are alright with me. Yeepsi (talk) 07:39, 17 April 2020 (UTC)