Talk:Free Churro/GA1

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

• In the caption, change "delivering" to "delivers". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "episodes of 2018". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "was not true". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "wrong funeral". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

• "title character (Bea Arthur) speaking" {{Right arrow}} "title character, Bea Arthur, speaking" {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The reference after "therapist" doesn't mention the episode's title, so I would add a second reference that does ([https://screenrant.com/bojack-horseman-eulogy-season-5-episode-6-maude-explained/ like this]). {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Citations should always be used after every quote, so I would recite the one from Collider after "single monologue". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The source being [https://www.awn.com/animationworld/bojack-horseman-director-amy-winfrey-serves-free-churro used from Animation World Network] actually says the three angles were switched "between talking about his mother, riffing on things, and telling funny stories", not "his mother, riffing and making jokes, and telling anecdotes". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• "for half an hour" {{Right arrow}} "for [half an hour]" or "for a half hour" (the actual quote) {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The rest of the article uses the entire show's title BoJack Horseman, so I would change the only use of BoJack after "other episodes of" to just that. {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a "Critical response" or "Critical reception" subsection header. {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 22:13, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Try adding more reviews and lowering the use of quotes with the guidelines at WP:RECEPTION. {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

• Washington Post {{Right arrow}} The Washington Post {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The Washington Post with "|url-access=limited". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The New Republic with "|url-access=limited" {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from Time with "|url-access=limited". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The Atlantic with "|url-access=limited". {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Try archiving all sources. I recommend using [https://iabot.toolforge.org/index.php?page=runbotsingle this tool]. {{Done}} Kncny11 ^(shoot) 23:25, 2 March 2021 (UTC)