Talk:Grumman F-9 Cougar/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:07, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:07, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

• There are a serious number of dead or non-RS links in the article.
• #1 and 11 are non-RS
• I'm not sure what relevance #24 is to the quote
• Double-check every external link and update them/find alternatives as necessary
• Be consistent about formatting access dates and archived dates
• Put #33 and 59 in the proper external link format so it displays properly
• Consolidate #60 and 61
• Fix the source links for :File:Grumman F9F-6 in flight 1952.JPG, :File:F9F-6 F9F-5 NAN7-52.jpg, :File:F9F-6 VF-24 CVA-9 1955.JPG (This one may not be copyright-free as well), :File:F9F-8 Blue Angels fleur de lis NAN8-55.jpg and :File:Grumman F-9 Cougar line drawings.PNG
• :File:F9F Cougar & F4U COAN ARA.jpg needs a source link
• The lead is too short
• Every paragraph needs a source. Lemme know whenever you're done with these problems and I'll start working through the prose.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:31, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
• Failing as non-responsive--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:06, 1 February 2021 (UTC)