Talk:HMS Rattlesnake (1910)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:18, 27 January 2024 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:18, 27 January 2024 (UTC)

• Images appropriately licensed
• Abbreviate nautical miles in the infobox
• Done.
• link long tons, direct drive and shaft horsepower
• Linked.
• What did the boilers feed the turbines?
• Steam. I've added a bit to the sentence that I hope helps clarify this.
• Three digits to the right of the decimal point seems a bit excessive
• I know. It is what the source says.
• {{xt|Kabatepe. turning the ship's}} is this supposed to be a comma?
• Fixed.
• Any word on activities in 1916?
• There is nothing in the sources about Rattlesnake explicitly but I have added something generic based on the flotilla's activity.
• {{xt|at Hampton Roads and via}} missing comma
• Reworded sentence to make it more clear.
• Hargreaves and Moore not used
• Removed.

{{ping|Sturmvogel 66}} Thank you. Please take a look at my amends and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 01:24, 10 February 2024 (UTC)