Talk:HMS Savage (1910)/GA1

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Nominator: {{User|Simongraham}} 14:32, 21 November 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 03:36, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

I will take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 03:36, 24 November 2024 (UTC)

• Article is stable
• Battlecruiser is a duplicated link
• Removed
• Image is correctly licensed
• Earwig reports copyvio unlikely

• "in this case by John I. Thornycroft & Company"
• Added.
• Do we know the type of depth charge carried?
• Unfortunately the sources do not say.

• "2 August 1914" repeated year
• Removed.
• "on a more successful sortie to Bizerta to coal" I don't understand this, more successful than what? This is a coaling sortie, so unsure if this is meant to be a direct comparison with a hunt for German warships?
• Good point. Removed,
• "Admiral Sackville Carden" Carden was a vice-admiral at the time
• Added.
• "the destroyer sailed for Tenedos," meant to be a full stop?
• Yes. Good spot.
• "A division of the class was dispatched to Devonport"...this part is a bit of a sudden turn from service off Turkey, and doesn't make it totally clear that it is referring to Savage
• Clarified.
• "called out on the night of 31 December to search for the survivors" Formidable was not torpedoed until 1 January
• Corrected.
• When does Savage return to the Mediterranean Fleet from the North Sea?
• Added, with a source.

• References look good. AGF for print sources.
• Corbett 1923, Grehan 2014, and Parkes 1969 are not used as sources.
• Removed.

{{ping|Simongraham}} Hi, that's all I have for now. Apologies again for the delay. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 16:42, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

:{{ping|Pickersgill-Cunliffe}} Not a problem. Thank you for taking the time to do this. simongraham (talk) 21:39, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

::{{ping|Simongraham}} Passing this as satisfying the GA criteria. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 21:45, 1 January 2025 (UTC)