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Talk:HSwMS Clas Fleming/GA1

GA Review

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| result = Passed. Z1720 (talk) 15:45, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Z1720 (talk · contribs) 17:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing article. Comments will be given below. Z1720 (talk) 17:57, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

:GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
  2. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|y}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
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  4. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
  5. :a (reference section): {{GAList/check|y}} b (inline citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}} c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}} d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
  6. ::
  7. It is broad in its coverage.
  8. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}} b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
  9. ::
  10. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  11. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
  12. ::
  13. It is stable.
  14. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
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  16. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
  17. :a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}} b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
  18. ::
  19. Overall:
  20. :Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}
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Prose:

  • "before she was began a reconstruction that installed" This sentence needs to be reworked.
  • "the first ship to be so equipped." First ship in the world, or in Sweden's navy? Clarify in the article
  • " enemy coast under cover of darkness" -> enemy coast at night while the enemy's visibility would be low.
  • Split the first sentence of "Background and description" to avoid a run-on
  • "the beginning of World War 2 in 1939" The beginning of the article used "World War II". This should be consistent.
  • I conducted some copy-editing while I read, feel free to revert if they are not helpful.

Source review:

  • No concerns with the sources.
  • No earwig concerns
  • References are offline or in another language, so accepting as AGF

Image review:

  • File:HMS Clas Fleming.jpg, File:Clas Fleming with two funnels.jpg, and File:Clas Fleming during WW2.jpg need US-pd tags.
  • Per MOS:ALT suggest adding alt text

Those are my thoughts. Ping me when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 18:17, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

:{{ping|Z1720}} Thanks for the review; see if my changes are acceptable.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:27, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

All concerns have been resolved, so this is a pass. Congratulations. Z1720 (talk) 15:44, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

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