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Talk:Harry Bolick/GA1

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 05:14, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
  2. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|yes}} b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|yes}}
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  4. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
  5. :a (reference section): {{GAList/check|yes}} b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|yes}} c (No original research): {{GAList/check|yes}} d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|yes}}
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  7. It is broad in its coverage.
  8. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|yes}} b (focused): {{GAList/check|yes}}
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  10. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  11. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|yes}}
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  13. It is stable.
  14. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|yes}}
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  16. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
  17. :a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|yes}} b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|yes}}
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  19. Overall:
  20. :Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|yes}}
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=Notes=

  • Added college boxers, boxing referees, pitchers, and Army cats
  • Remove ref from lead. It's already in the article.
  • Done.
  • "Southeastern A. A. U. tournament" link AAU perhaps
  • Done.
  • Should Erskine baseball say 1946-47? The lake view one has a two year span and i thought he was only at lake view for one year
  • I changed the Lake View one.
  • How do we know he coached football at Seneca and Ford?
  • Per [https://www.newspapers.com/article/the-gaffney-ledger/118489934/ this] ref: "Jack Ross, former football player, will assume his duties as coach at Seneca High School next Monday, according to Superintendent J. N. Kellett. The 20-year-old ex-Marine succeeds Harry Bolick, former Presbyterian star, who has accepted the job as coach at Ford High School in Laurens."
  • the infobox said he was all state in 1934 but I dont think i see that in the article?
  • Hmmm... you're right - it didn't say that in the article and I don't know how I found that initially, but I did a search and did find that to be correct so I added it in the prose.

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:39, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

  • {{ping|WikiOriginal-9}} BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:02, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
  • All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)