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| result = Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:34, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:Harry Wunsch/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: {{User|BeanieFan11}} 01:42, 19 April 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:25, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:25, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

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#It is reasonably well written.

  1. :a (prose, spelling, and grammar): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): {{GAList/check|y}}
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
  3. :a (references): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (citations to reliable sources): {{GAList/check|y}}
    c (OR): {{GAList/check|y}}
    d (copyvio and plagiarism): {{GAList/check|y}}
  4. It is broad in its coverage.
  5. :a (major aspects): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (focused): {{GAList/check|y}}
  6. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
  7. :Fair representation without bias: {{GAList/check|y}}
  8. It is stable.
  9. :No edit wars, etc.: {{GAList/check|y}}
  10. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
  11. :a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): {{GAList/check|y}}
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions): {{GAList/check|y}}
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Overall:

Pass/Fail: {{GAList/check|y}}

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=Comments=

  • {{tq|The Notre Dame Official Football Review described}} since you already said "Notre Dame" earlier, I would remove this second reference to it.
  • {{tq|for his senior, weighing 212 pounds}} are you missing "year"?
  • {{tq|He was awarded Notre Dame's athletic council member that year for being the team's best blocker.}} I don't understand this sentence? You may need to say "medal" instead of "member"?
  • {{tq|He married Elsie Goethals in 1935 and had three children with her.}}-->{{tq|He married Elsie Goethals that same year and had three children with her.}}
  • {{tq|He died on April 30, 1954, in South Bend, of a heart attack.[2] He was age 43 at his death.}} I would combine these.
  • Regarding the new selection system for captain, it looks like it was a new captain for each game. You should explain this.
  • {{U|BeanieFan11}}, I think you missed this one. Maybe just note that the new selection system was a new captain for each game. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:30, 24 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Oops! I added that now {{ping|Gonzo fan2007}} BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:32, 24 April 2025 (UTC)
  • References:
  • All appear to be consistently formatted and appropriate for what is being cited
  • Spot checks: 2, 5, 7, 9, 11
  • Ref 2 should be titled "Harry F. Wunsch"

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:05, 21 April 2025 (UTC)

  • {{ping|Gonzo fan2007}} I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:25, 24 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Nice work, passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:33, 24 April 2025 (UTC)

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