Talk:Hepatic hydrothorax/GA2

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:This review is transcluded from Talk:Hepatic hydrothorax/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: {{User|Aeschylus}} 18:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 10:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

I should finish the review today. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 10:22, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

• {{Green|It is much more common on the right side, with 85% of cases occurring on the right}} redundancy
• Link severe ascites on fist occurrence
• {{Green|In cases that do not respond}} What does "cases" mean here?
• {{Green|The prognosis is usually poor.}} Needs further explanation
• {{Green|In some people, the main symptoms of people with cirrhosis are respiratory and related to the effusion.}} Unsourced
• {{Green|The condition generally has no specific symptoms}} comma after symptoms
• {{Green|The condition generally has no specific symptoms as it generally occurs}} Redundancy
• I notice the articles is underlinked. Please fix that
• {{Green| less than 1 cm}} Add a cvt template
• I don't see anything on its causes
• {{Green|For those with refractory hepatic hydrothorax}} Change those to patients
• {{Green|In people with serious liver dysfunction, TIPS may cause liver failure, as it shunts blood away from the liver.}} Unsourced
• Please change for those to for patients throughout the article
• Sources are reliable
• :File:Hepatic hydrothorax after treatment.png lacks an author

{{Re|Aeschylus}} That's all from me. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 11:31, 12 June 2024 (UTC)

:Sounds good! I will work on it promptly.
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11: {{partly done}}: I changed to people, as we need to write for the layperson per MEDMOS
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13: {{not done for now}} Doesn't this violate MEDMOS?
15: {{done}} aeschylus (talk) 20:33, 12 June 2024 (UTC)

Driveby comment.

Article on medical conditions should strive to use the most up-to-date appropriate sources, per WP:MEDDATE. There's a recent open access review at {{pmid|38505059}} that perhaps could be used in this article. Esculenta (talk) 14:19, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

:{{Re|aeschylus}} You might want to consider this. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 19:43, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

:I am, my activity is on-and-off. I will do so rn. aeschylus (talk) 21:53, 13 June 2024 (UTC)

::{{Re|aeschylus}} Let me know if you're done, because it seems like you aren't even addressing some of the issues I've raised. Wolverine XI ^{(talk to me)} 07:23, 15 June 2024 (UTC)

:::@Wolverine XI: AFAIK, I have addressed all of your concerns. However, I may have missed some. If I have, don't hesitate to let me know. aeschylus (talk) 19:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

:{{done}}. aeschylus (talk) 19:33, 20 June 2024 (UTC)

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