Talk:Hotel Wolcott/GA1

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Reviewer: Bruxton (talk · contribs) 03:30, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

:Happy to review this article. It may take me more than a week because I am traveling. Bruxton (talk) 03:30, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

::Thanks Bruxton, I appreciate it. And feel free to take your time. Epicgenius (talk) 13:46, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

{{ok}} good lead summary. All of the elements are cited in the body and the lead summarizes the article.

:{{ok}} consider removing had from "42nd Street had contained brownstones"

:{{ok}} "and eastern elevations contain plain brick facades" consider "and eastern elevations have plain brick facades"

:{{ok}} "to the west (right) are a wood-and-glass door" consider "is"

:{{ok}} "The third through eighth stories contain a pink-brick facade" consider "have" a pink...

:{{ok}} "the two center bays of the Wolcott's facade has oriel windows" consider "have"

:{{ok}} "Near the center of the hotel, there were also a palm room to the left of the lobby" consider "was".

:{{ok}} "The ground story also contains a ballroom covering 3,500" consider has instead of contains

:{{ok}} "little chicken that come unplucked from the Jersey farms" does the quote say "come" or came?

:{{ok}} "the hotel become a shelter for homeless former prisoners" consider "became"

::I have done all of the above. Regarding the chicken quote, the original source says "come", as it was a contemporary brochure published from the time of the hotel's opening. Epicgenius (talk) 13:45, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

:{{ok}} Site section citations check out,

:{{ok}} Architecture section cotations check out

:{{ok}} Facade citations check out

:{{ok}} Features sections checks out

:{{ok}} Public rooms section, I am having trouble confirming this citation for "The lobby ends at a checkout counter."

::The source says: "But the lobby ends abruptly with a modest check-in desk, which shuts off what was formerly an equally elaborate ballroom." I've fixed this. Epicgenius (talk) 21:59, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

:{{ok}} Guestrooms spot checked citations check out

:{{ok}} History the citations I can access check out AGF

:{{ok}} Development and opening citations check out

:{{ok}} 1900s to 1960s citations check out

:{{ok}} 1970s to present spot checked citations check out

:{{ok}} Critical reception Cannot access the citations AGF

:{{ok}} I think per MOS:ORDER we need to move the portal bar below the navigation footer templates

::I have fixed this. Thanks for the review. Epicgenius (talk) 22:00, 18 March 2024 (UTC)

:{{ok}} Images are relevant and free

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