Talk:Hoylande Young/GA1

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• there would be value in explaining what Iota Sigma Pi is.
• the ANL should have initial caps for all words
• worth mentioning she was survived by her sister.

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• University of Chicago is overlinked

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• the Chicago ACS bio says she was a consultant between 34 and 38, but the article says she was unemployed?

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• there is no image, but the Flickr one linked at the bottom appears to be 2.0. I would think it could be used.

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{{GATable/item|7|y|Placing on hold for seven days for comments to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 13:04, 25 December 2014 (UTC) Passing GA, well done.

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