Talk:Ikarus IK-2/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:50, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:50, 13 January 2016 (UTC)
- No DABs, external link OK
- Image has appropriate fair-use rationale.
- {{xt|Belgrade then in Ilić's apartment in Novi Sad they}} set off the subordinate phrase with commas.
- Expand and link shp and force landed
- {{xt|with the hub-firing cannon}} Rephrase, I'm not sure that readers will follow from propeller spinner to (propeller) hub. You might want to clarify that the gun was mounted between the cylinder banks of the engine.
- {{xt|while IK-1 crashed into the ground}} the IK-1
- {{xt|and tailplane using fabric covering}} fabric covered
- {{xt|IK-2 and Hawker Fury I biplane}} the Hawker... already in service with the VVKJ.
- Link staffeln
- {{xt|were observed heading towards Nova Topola just as two IK-2s were returning from a patrol in the poor flying weather}} Clarify that they were landing when the Germans were spotted.
- Italicize the title of Grujic.
- Move the commons link to the further reading section.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:04, 30 January 2016 (UTC)
- All done, Sturm. [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ikarus_IK-2&type=revision&diff=702551580&oldid=697040662 These] are my edits. Thanks for the review! Regards, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:28, 31 January 2016 (UTC)