Talk:Interstate 95 in New Hampshire/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Bneu2013 (talk · contribs) 06:06, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
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I will be reviewing this article, and will have comments soon. Bneu2013 (talk) 06:06, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
:Update - sorry about the delay in reviewing, something came up, and I got busy with other things. I will have my first comments in a few hours. Bneu2013 (talk) 19:49, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
{{ping|SounderBruce}} - comments have been posted. Bneu2013 (talk) 22:10, 17 May 2023 (UTC)
:{{ping|Bneu2013}} All comments have been addressed. SounderBruce 00:14, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
:{{ping|Bneu2013}} New comments have been addressed. SounderBruce 07:52, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
=Infobox and lead=
- No major issues. I was caught by the statement that the turnpike begins "near" the Massachusetts state line, but I see that is where the tolling begins.
=Route description=
Confused about the liquor stores. Since this sentence says the Interstate crosses two state highways without interchanges, how are they accessed?- Split to avoid confusion. The liquor stores have exits, while the other highways do not (which is typical for a turnpike).
Is "Hampton outlet" a proper name? If this refers to something in the town of Hampton, move the link to the town here.- Not a proper name. Link moved.
Change second use of "NH 101" to "This highway" or something else.- Shifted things a bit to have all NH 101 information contained within one sentence.
=History=
In final sentence of first paragraph, change "was" to "were" and consider linking NH 1 to the history section of U.S. Route 1 in New Hampshire.- Done, but with some added filler to prevent confusion.
Change "was opposed" to "faced opposition" and comma after "beaches".- Done, with some reworking for better flow.
Does "limited exits" mean limited-access, or a limited number of exits?- The latter has been added.
{{tq|State highway engineer Daniel Dickenson resigned from their positions}} - did someone else also resign? If not, change to "his position".- Fixed.
{{tq|Morse was later fired from his position by Frank Merrill, the new state highway commissioner following the resignation of Frederic E. Everett.}} - how much later was this firing. Was Everett's resignation also a result of this scandal?- Removed Everett.
I've never heard of 24-ft wide lanes. Maybe 12 ft lanes?- The source is inconsistent, so I've opted to remove the measurement entirely.
Was the Massachusetts spur built at the same time?- Not clear in the sources.
Consider mentioning that the I-95 designation was applied to the turnpike when AASHO approved the numbering in August 1957.- The month is not as important here.
Was the US 1 Bypass ever designated as part of I-95, despite not meeting interstate standards?- Not clear from the sources I have on hand.
Change "constructed" to "reconstructed in the sentence about the 1968 widening projects. Also, was this a Massachusetts project?- Using "rebuilt", and unsure about jurisdiction here. If it's not in the newspapers, I'm in the dark.
=Tolls=
This certainly isn't a requirement, but a lot of articles about toll roads contain a history of the toll fares, and their inflation-adjusted price.
:I consider that to be excessive, especially for a non-system article. The initial toll is already mentioned and it should be enough for a non-enthusiast.
=Exit list=
Is "All Maine Points" a proper name? Is this also what the signs say?- It matches the signage.
=References=
=General comments=
- Images are properly licensed.
- Passes the [https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Interstate+95+in+New+Hampshire&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0 Earwig test].
- No more issues. Passed.
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